Hmmm... Perhaps you could have some kind of flashback, stating why Pinkie Pie started this killing. I know it's for the cupcakes, but there could be a darker story to it than that... Or perhaps Pinkie Pie has to kill another filly and...I don't know. Oh! Or-Or! One of the Cakes' kids comes up. Maybe their too young, but it could be a time skip.
Let me read it first.
Then we will see.
Hmmm...
Perhaps you could have some kind of flashback, stating why Pinkie Pie started this killing. I know it's for the cupcakes, but there could be a darker story to it than that...
Or perhaps Pinkie Pie has to kill another filly and...I don't know.
Oh! Or-Or! One of the Cakes' kids comes up. Maybe their too young, but it could be a time skip.
2086983 I like the idea the one of the Cakes' twins come up. I could use it for a later idea
2086983 I also like the flash back idea.
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Thanks.
I didn't wrack my brain, but I did put some thought into those ideas.
Much more thought than some of my homework.
Heh...