A Guide to Writing Series

Yes, I'm totally gonna rip off this idea. Totally.
Did I just type that? Oh well. Aaaand, we are on to introduction!

Ok, so you want to write? Awesome. Don't want bad feedback? Ask me about that later, because now I'm going to start teaching about punctuation.

COMMAS
Yes, the greatest foe to any author on an iPad. Yet, I type this on an iPad, yet I have no issues. I mean, it's right by the M and the ?. Well, can't keep worrying. Let me know if you have any questions.
How to use them
Look at the following sentence:
Joe come here I need to tell you something really important it's important enough to be an emergency so come quick and I mean it.
It sucks balls. But, now look at it:
Joe come here, I need to tell you something really important, it's important enough to be an emergency, so come quick, and I mean it.
Yes, a bit runoff-y, but it has commas! See how important it is? Here, fix the following sentences in the comments.

1) Jill went to her friends house where she told her about her new puppy card game and dress.
2) Mikey had to come up with some cash and quickly unless he wants to spend the night in jail.
3) I shall totally obliterate my enemies because if not they have a chance of capturing me and torturing me my friends and murdering me.

Go! Do your homework!