Preview for you and advice for me about GTVS next chapter. · 1:14pm May 22nd, 2014
Hello,
I hope you've enjoyed GTVS latest chapter ;)
Anyway, I'm busy on the next one, I don't know when it will be done, but it will involve clubbing and I need opinions on the outfits I'm about to show you that I would like to use ^^... (I only found two actually Humanized characters pictures on the six I was looking for, but some characters are hard to find :p)
Fiona’s clubbing duds : Though, with less holes in the top 
Viola’s outfit : Though with shorter heels and with subtler earrings 
Beatrice’s dress : It changes from the Carebear costume at Halloween
Laura’s clothes: I don’t know why but I can never imagine Lyra humanized without a pair of pants...
Diana’s dress: Maybe Nathan will notice her in this ;)
Tavi : (with less accessories... I'm not sure about that one... might too outgoing for the characterization I done on her so far... What do you think?)
Don't hesitate to tell me what you think and/or if you have something to suggest
Ohhhhhh looks good!
And I agree with you about Tavi having less accessories, she doesn't really seem like the type of girl to wear flashy jewelry.
I like the choice on their outfits. And while I do like Tavi's choice in clothing, I agree that it's not necessary for all of that accessories. I do like that simple necklace and bracelet that bears her pony counterpart's Cutie Mark.
Actually, about Fiona... I know you said that the outfit you picked would have less holes and tears, but it's kind of hard to imagine that short, green dress with the orange sash and scarf as suitable clothes for clubbing. As for my suggestion, how a traditional, Southern-like attire: a green-and-orange, plaid shirt and blue jeans (or one that is fashioned like a skirt). Plus, she can still keep her boots and white cowboy/girl hat.
By the way, why does Viola have spiky earrings?
I'm not disapproving them, I'm just curious, that's all.
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Those are good points for Fiona,
Though, it's only to show a relatively close image of her pony-self: Matter of fact, she'll wear something like this : dress top. That sort of cloth that can be used as dress, or as a top with you wear a pair of trousers... Though in much simpler design and Twenty-three % more comfortable :p...
Plus I saw her like her Cuzin Jacquelyn, "Ah'm gonna wear something' comfortable, not some frou-frou glittery, lacy outfit"
I might add a pair of jeans to it ... not sure....
Tavi looks great. But definitely take out the accessories. Like all of them lol.
What will Vinyl wear or be wearing? Im sure if they arent going with her then they will bump into her at the club or she will be DJ'ing at it.
OH IS BONNIE THERE TOO?! SHIP LAURA AND BONNIE!!!
2135112 I agree. I definitely don't see Fiona as someone who would wear something as glittering or "frou-frou" as the rest the girls. But regarding with the dress top you were showing in the last reply... do you think it will go well with the hat and boots?
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Maybe, but I will make it green none the less, probably not the same green as in the picture I picked in the blog post...
Aye, I'd say not as many accessories for Tavi. The necklace and earrings sure, but not a whole lot. Unless Vinyl had gone shopping with her for the outfit and suggested each
Also, I'd say that Tavi would wear it because Vinyl may have/must have said it looked awesome on her (or Octavia wanted to impress Vinyl).
The rest looks pretty good though, are they going to a club that Vinyl is/has played at? Does Vinyl go with them? It had sounded like she knew what they were doing after all.
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I just couldn't find the dresses alone 
It was mostly the dresses that mattered
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I would answer.... if I knew it myself
2135395 uh huh, a likely story
You're just trying not to give out too much to get us all hyped up and excited that GTVS is back 
Okay…
Fiona: No. That is not a clubbing outfit. While I totally agree that she wouldn’t want to wear some “frou-frou” dress, that outfit, is, frankly, fit for two things:
1. Cosplaying Fiddlesticks.
2. That’s it.
I think what would be better is just jeans and a green or orange flannel shirt, with the hat and boots.
Viola: It’s perfectly fine, the only thing I don’t really like is the earrings. Maybe just some gold dangle earrings.
Beatrice: Perfect the way it is. As for shoes (you didn't put any so I assume you haven't chosen any), I think just some nude pumps or something simple like that.
Laura: Again, the only thing I don’t like is the earrings. You could probably just do away with them altogether.
Diana: I like it, but the ring’s a little weird, and the dress could stand to be a little bit longer, just an inch or two.
Tavi: That is quite possibly the weirdest dress I have ever seen. It’s got that long sheer ruffle thing, it’s a bit too sparkly, it’s got those cutout things, it’s weird, I don’t like it. And I just don’t really think it would be something she’d wear. I’m thinking maybe something a little like this, but a few inches longer and in a slate gray color (and with the same black leggings and boots as you suggested).
I agree on what you said about the accessories, though, what’s in the picture is just too much for her. I’d say just scrap all the accessories except the necklace, earrings, and clutch.
I just realized what's been bugging me about Tavi's pic. Look at her left arm! Her elbow and wrist are obviously broken!
That said, most of what I would have said has already been said by others. I agree with Pickle on Fiona's outfit. Just not apropos for clubbing. I do like Tavi's outfit though. Just ditch everything but the necklace, earrings, and purse. Maybe change the gemstone in the earrings from an emerald to a ruby or aquamarine?
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Oh my god that would be purrrfect on Tavi!
there going clubbing... i have a bad feeling about this -.-
also i agree with all of them! except tavi, the clothes looks a little to amm "old" for her i like the boodts and the dress a dont think its her style.
I have been told by my sister that I have no fashion sense whatsoever ...so I'm pretty much no help...I dunno about the dress but Tavi looks hot in it lol hehe...
Congrats on the year anniversary of GTVS ...I'm jealous that u can keep up the pace of ur chapters lol congrats!
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Thanks for all your all your comments, they helped me a lot. And I'm pleased to announce that the next chapter is finished and just been sent to my editors/proofreaders
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You're the best! 
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2140895 wow your fast boy!!!