Sneak peak of part 2 · 1:29am Jun 29th, 2014
The new chapter is done and Kestrel is now editing it. While waiting i decided to give everyone a little sneak peak of something to come ;)
While we still have a few chapters to go in part 1 of Piercing the Heavens, i decided to go have fun with the pony maker again.
Here are some more OC's that will be appearing in part 2. I am leaving their names off for now in order to keep this as a teaser and nothing more.
Now here's the catch...
ONE OF THESE 5 IS A FAKE
Why do this? So nobody knows exactly what's going on in my head of course! hehehe Gotta keep things in the dark so you don't know what to expect >:)
just know that all four that are actually used will also have unique personalities (which i've already mapped out) and be relevant in the story. Making up the personalities of squad 3 was so much fun in Flying Sky High... why limit myself to only a few? ;)
My friend, I believe the yellow colt at the far right is the one who gave Fleetfoot the megaphone who she then flirted with. Is this a reasonable assumption?
SECOND ONE IS FAKE HUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHU
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Maybe??????
That Kamina one better not be a fake...
Also, I'm finally done with the edits
so hopefully the story will be updated within the next hour. Sorry for taking so long...
first one
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You two just love to tease me, but no I will wait and keep to what I said. Also Calm, you seem to really like Gurran Laggan. Is it like your second favorite show? *sigh* I'll be waiting for the next two realeses.
Now also comes the question, who are all of these ponies? And when exactly will we hear about the,? Are they nice? Are they perhaps more recruits?
All these questions and more will probably not be answered next time on Piercing the Heavens!
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I actually know nothing of the plot line prior to receiving the chapters for editing, at the absolute most, the longest I've ever known something about the story before you guys was about 8 hours. Generally however long it takes Calm to correct and post.
So I'm not actually trying to tease anyone
BLAAARG!!! I CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER!!! XD
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No, I was talking about the blog posts and you talking about releasing it.
Till the next one
-R
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Oh, sorry... I just wanted to give an update so you guys weren't totally in the dark
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, I'm not saying it's bad just look at what lighting flash oc said. Well I'll be waiting for the chapter after this one.
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you sure? it's 7.7K wordsssss....
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It's up now
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and haha i haven't told Kestrel anything about any of these characters. He may be my editor, but he doesn't get any spoilers
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That's just cold. You drive a hard bargin my friend but *shakes head* no I won't crack, I will stay true to my words.
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Yes Gurren Lagann is by far my favorite anime, even though i haven't watched the entirey of the second season yet
Is it the first one?
Firstly thats evil. EBIL infact, so EVIL its mispelled!!!
Secondly, Fantastic work on the OC.
Third...ly?
WHAT????? 
Youve... YOu haven't... I.. But... GAH 
Finish it!!!! THEY THROW GALAXIES !!
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yeah i know, just havent had the chance
Second one? She looks like a filly to me… Either that or she's exceptionally short.
If not that one, the last one?
So the votes for the fake currently stand at, going from left to right"
● A with 2
● B with 1
● C with 1 (my vote)
● D with 0
● E with 1
Now to determine names for all of these ponies... and their bearing on the story
EITHER THE MIDDLE ONE OR THE GRAY STALLION!! I KNOW YOU ARE TRICKING US WOTH THAT FILLY!! GIVE US THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!! IKNOW YOU JUST POSTED THE EIGHT K ONE, BUT IT PASSED WAY TOO QUICKLY!!
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As soon as I get back from the gym I'm getting right on it
*upgrades the metaphorical trampoline*
2243039 NOW OR I'LL BREAK THE GYM ROOF ALSO AND MAKE YOU PAY FOR IT CAUSE TECHNICLLY IT IS YOUR FAULT THAT I BROKE IT!!!
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there is no escape....
That second pony reminds me Fluttershy. I don't know...small,yellow,long pink mane,pegasus,almost the same eye color..O.o :D
I think that that 1. or 4. is a fake. I can't decide between this 2.
That first pony better be legit...
2243209 NO!! NO ESCAPE!!
Based on chapter 16 I'm still going to say #3 is the fake. I think 2 and 4 were mentioned by name in chapter 16
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unless of course, Little Star is meant to be a pun
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Nope, not buying it... I think I'm right on this one.
2260450 still say 1
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Kamina pony better be real or I'm gonna have to talk to Calm