About Dark Corners of Equestria

Its done. I've published my first written work to an actual big audience.
Before this point i wrote just together with a few friends of mine. As we know each other, problems or misunderstandings were seldom. I also used to write in german, and had therefore no problems with the language itself.
So it was a bit of an experiment. English, and an audience i don't know.

Here a few words to the story itself.

It may contain spoilers - be warned, dear reader.

Yeah. at first it was meant as my approach to a Trixie Lulamoon redemption story.
I think, she is one of the more interesting villains in the show. Whereby villain may be the wrong word. She is a boaster and a showoff. But i can't imagine her outright evil (like, say Tirek or Sombra).

I also didn't want to change the character and create just a new mindset with the physical appereance of Trixie. I think she will keep her attitude even after the finish. Not as prominent as before - but still. I hope there was enough development. Most of her downfall took place off screen. But this was more a concession to don't create some lenghty description of unpleasant events.

The real antagonist in this story should be kept a secret - for the Mane 6 at least. You may have recognized him. Red fur, strange pony. Hoarse voice. Disguised, so you can't tell his face. The events took place after the episode "Its about time", wherin the Tartaros is not properly secured for a glimpse of time. And before Tirek regained enough of his old strengh to start suck magic from unicorns.
And, yes. I like mysterie, strange tales and the works of Lovecraft, as you may guess.

Hmm. I am really a bit unsure, due to the little attention the story got so far.
Maybe I am just impatient or overestimate myself.

Anyway - as long as its fun, I'll keep on writing.