Another quick sample!

From the next chapter!

That moment, I swore, whatever I had promised to do to King Sombra before, it would be nothing compared to what I would do to him now. I would make Marv from Sin City look like the f***ing angel of mercy when I was done. Forget medieval, and forget bronze age. I would go Planck Epoch on Sombra's a**.

Comments

[Shadow Bolt]

I hope this doesn't mean Sombra killed his wife.

[Concave_Prism]

Do you have a release schedual for this fic? Like, a new chapter every monday or something?

[BlueYoshi]

Go, Conrad! Kick Sombra's butt! Show that shadowy figure who's the boss!

[Solid Punch]

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Don't look like it. This is words of pissed off, not words of raged from grief and guilt (aka "he killed her, it's my fault, if I'd not marry her, she'd be alive!")

[CDR]

Oh gods, you took my suggestion to go even further back than the Bronze Age to the utmost extreme. Now on to the next step in escalation. Sombra's already dead now, he just doesn't know it yet.

[Krazyfan1]

..please tell me he eats some of the magic that gives Sombra the whole "turn into semi invincible cloud that can fly" ability?
or how about he kicks Sombra somewhere....you know where... so hard "IT" explodes...
we all know he deserves it...

[Firemind]

2719688 Either that or he just lights a match.

[Jack Kellar]

Oooooh, next chappy is gonna be good!

[SwordOfWieldThe3rd]

Yes!!! It's coming!!

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[Lancerlot]

Or, "How to defeat King Sombra with nothing but an excellent sense of timing and a leaf-blower."

[Reykan]

Like the idea, love the fact that you included a link to Wikipedia in the blog.