Major editing of WoiE -Chapters 1-3 / fixed Applejacks

Spent a good portion of time doing some heavy editing of the first few chapters of Waking up in Equestria.

Did a lot of grammar fixing and editing while making some changes to drop the level of innuendo and sexual stuff to make it flow better and not seem so rushed. This whole thing started with the intent of writing a short clop fic with Scootaloo and somewhere along the way became something else.

Also fixed the first 17 chapters of Applejack being two words instead of one.

Comments

[harts fire]

I am sure these miner changes may look small but will help the story over all we the readers appreciate you effort's.

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This whole thing started with the intent of writing a short clop fic with Scootaloo and somewhere along the way became something else.

I have never heard such a gorse understatement.
if this was intended to be just a short clop fic with no real planning on your part salty I get the felling you are hiding your true talent as I righter.
Harts Fire

[saltybedspackle]

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Honest truth. Never wrote anything before. Started Waking up in Equestria on a whim just to contribute something to the site and fully expected it to get down voted to hell in a matter of hours.