Time to chuck in some systems! · 10:58pm Jul 14th, 2015
Choose your own adventure - Toxic Romance will soon have a couple or more systems chucked into it.
I obviously can't reveal everything, but for now here's this...
The Chance System! - There will come a few decisions in this adventure where avoiding Nightmare is impossible, during these moments the chance system will happen. A kind of 50/50 moment where you have to choose between moving in one direction or the other, moving back from where you came in the hopes of escaping her line of sight, or waiting (This one is rarely advized, but you can click it if you like)
Nightmare's Suspicion Meter - Some of the decisions you make eariler on can have horrendous consequences later down the line, leading to a point where you may be trapped in a specific room with Nightmare. During this point a number of short decisions MUST be made in the correct order or she will find you! A percentage number will be put somewhere around the top of each decision chapter, the higher it is the closer you are to being found!
I hope you enjoy these systems, more may come later.
Don't get caught!
Sounds interesting, can't wait to try it
Whee! Let's go!
*Excitement intensifies*
Sounds cool but also sounds complicated. This system is like video game choices.
I can dig it.
Intriguing
These are extremely hard to do.
I've tried one of these things before, and by the GODS are they complex as hell.
Though the payoff is absolutely great.
So good luck!
This sounds extremely difficult. For you
Not quite sure about this. I'm a little skeptical, but I'm willing to see where this goes before making an actual judgement.
I'm waiting for the bathroom situation then.
You go into a stall and then get a choice: to fart, or not to fart.
i saw everything you writer and all I can thought was this
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This sounds absolutely amazing and immersive. I expect it to be great fun for your fans but we just hope you dont make it too hard on yourself c:
This sounds quite complex to complete especially further down the line when the consequences can be so diverse.
Zam, I have always kept my eye on your work, but I cannot lay down anymore and let this crap slide. I just have one question for you, WTF is this SHIT?!!! I mean, being spontaneous is one thing, but THIS?!! This is....too much. I had hoped you would have turned out something better after that Absolute Power story and ended this craze of a "crazy loving" mother fetish you seem to have put ever since that "Child In Me" story, but now I see that you have lost your roots, the fundamentals that made me WANT to follow and read up on you.
I will do what noone else will, and sure, this comment may get deleted or even trolled, but this needs to be heard. Your stories on Digimon, The Power of Disarin, and others are what made me want to follow up on you, but unless you change course from this "mother" crap, I am afraid I cannot continue to view your stuff. I dunno what is it with these overly drooling fan-boys that don't know real quality if it bit em on the doorknob, but now I think you lost touch with your original self because noone stands up to truely tell you the truth.
If you want nostalgia, here is a few links to some other stories you wrote. Get some nostalgia from THESE.
Afraid to Dream
Split Digiality
The Power of Disarin
And here is something I think you need...
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Sorry to disapoint you, but I don't do Digimon anymore. You're probably better off unfollowing because my roots are mostly likely going to stay buried.
Though I admit to being a tad confused on what this blog has to do with my 'mother stuff'
3239558 Alright, the thing I should have mentioned was this, your writing stuff was getting too far its original roots of being more creepy and the "Oh Shit, this girl is gonna rape me and possibly kill me" factor to this new factor where its just being motherly and stuff.
That is why I put in the older stories of Digimon in there to begin with, the first link was a good example of what I hoped to see, but never did. Your "mother stuff" as I put it was a complete departure from what I first saw, and now this 'pick your own adventure' was a bit off the wall, like the mother stuff. The Digimon stuff was put there just so you could 'get a spark of inspiration' just like what you got from the Toxic Romance story. I know you aren't doing Digimon no more, but I hoped to spark you back to your old fundamentals by trying something out of the box.
Can't blame me for trying.
I understand you are spontaneous, but at the same time it could be said spontaneality sometimes broke the machine as it were, which is what I see here. But tis your stuff. Can't say I tried.
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Life moves on mate, and so do I. This CYOA thing I have will hopefully become a thing as I carry it on, maybe you're still around to read it, maybe not.
Still, thanks for reading and evidently enjoying what you did