Pre-Reader... No Longer Needed. Thanks!

Hi, guys!

I'm happy with where the story is at. Look for it in the near future. Thanks!

Vivid

Things have finally gotten a bit quieter in my life, and I'm able to spend more time on writing. As such, I have a new story in the works, and I would love to get your initial reaction! Please keep in mind: this story is not a finished product, so the quality isn't up to what I would usually publish. If you don't mind seeing something a little less polished, however, I'd love to hear your thoughts on things like mood, pacing, word choice, and anything that sticks out or seems weird. Note: Please PM me any comments you have instead of putting them in the comments.

If all that doesn't scare you off, here's what you need to know:

Title: "The Family Recipe"
Characters: Carrot Cake, Pound Cake
Length: One-shot, 5k words

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Password: Carrot

Short Description: Carrot Cake teaches his son the family recipe.

Thanks again, everyone, and if you have any questions, let me know.