Notes to Myself (Ebb and Flow) · 3:33am Sep 9th, 2012
Seeing where I stand on the sight, these blogs were more notes to myself, if anything. So, I will title them appropriately. Now, my blog.
She swung her stick. The beast flicked it away.
Ow. That was painful to type. No, that was horrible. That was an atrocity. That was so bad, I need to slap myself in the face for defiling such an innocent idea. *WHAP*
Why did that sound like a textbook, and not the usual quality work I do? It's simple, transitions. In my writing class, we learned that transitions are the sign post in your story. They tell the reader where your story is going. They connect sentences together and give them flow. Now, let me try this again, with transitions.
Another example:
Not using transitions makes things hard to read. Sentences seem to come out of no where. The reader will get lost.
Now, I will add transitions to both statements
She swung her stick, BUT the beast flicked it away.
Not using transitions makes things hard to read. WITHOUT TRANSITIONS, sentences seem to come out of no where. IF TRANSITIONS ARE NOT USED, the reader will get lost.
Now go, add those transitions.
Always Sincerely,
The Music Man
