First Page of the Next I'll Do Anything for You Chapter! · 11:51pm Aug 25th, 2016
Yeah, felt like sharing it. I'd like to hear what you think! 
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“Ya know, I can’t remember a time when I saw Scootaloo as happy as she was today, Twilight,” Rainbow said as she laid her fork back down on the table. She eyed the silky white gloves that ran just past her knees, keeping her warm on this most chilliest of nights. They had been a gift from Twilight, along with the rest of her outfit. In stark contrast to her dress that she had worn to her first Grand Galloping Gala, this one was pure white, just like her gloves. It hugged her body as if it was a leotard, and ended in a skirt that stopped a few inches above the ground. It wasn’t really her thing, but it felt wonderful, and if it made Twilight happy, then she would gladly wear it. Thankfully, Twilight was in a similar dress, but instead of white, it was a midnight blue, a color she envied. She was wearing gloves like hers, and to top it all off, she was wearing a cute bow that matched the color of her dress. Rainbow scratched her right ear, feeling her own bow brush against her hoof. She’d almost said no to wearing it, but when she saw how adorable it made Twilight look, she had changed her mind.
“Yeah, same here,” Twilight said, pushing away her empty plate. “I knew that it’d make her really happy, especially after the doctor said… well, you know what he said.” She sat back, biting her bottom lip.
“Sure, but for you to figure out why she can’t fly is a step in the right direction, uh… right?” Rainbow pushed her plate away too as their waiter brought the check. She reached out and grabbed the check before Twilight could grab it. “Uh… Twilight?”
“Yes, Dash?”
“Why is our bill over a hundred bits?” Rainbow let her hoof drift down as she stared at Twilight.
“Well, this is the best restaurant in Canterlot. I told you that we had to dress up for this, so I had Rarity make us these fantastic dresses.” She took a sip of wine and licked her lips.
Rainbow placed the bill back down on the table, then rubbed her foreleg. “So you had Rarity make us these dresses in what, a day? I know it can take her weeks for her to make a nice dress, but for her to make these overnight had to have been really expensive. And on top of getting us the dresses, you want to pay the bill? You’ve already paid too much, Twilight. Let me pay, please; it’s the least I can do.”
“Nope!” Twilight chirped with a smile on her face. She lit her horn and grabbed the bill, then placed a significantly-sized bag of bits on top of it. “Each dress was more expensive than this bill, but…” She stood up and nodded towards the door on the other side of the room.
Rainbow stood up and followed Twilight outside, leaving the candle-lit room behind them. “What?” She saw Twilight trot down the sidewalk a little bit, stopping in front of an alleyway. Rainbow walked up next to her and opened her mouth, but instead of words coming out, she felt Twilight’s tongue coming in instead. Her eyes going wide, she felt Twilight push her up against the restaurant’s wall, just inside the alley, pinning her as she moaned softly. Rainbow’s eyes drifted shut as she let Twilight take the lead, their tongues dancing a furious, needy tango of love.
This is a rough draft, by the way. I'll edit it and whatnot when I finish the chapter.
First comment, p.s. Cool
Dang! Must've been the wine.
A new chapter soon? Looking forward to it!
And the sneak peek looks fun.
Like it n3n looking forward to more
I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
So cuuuteee! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Pretty neat. I hope Twilight is a generous tipper. A bill of over a hundred bits would mean a tip that is over twenty bits. Which. Is. Fair. And. Reasonable.
yes x 9000
Oh, my goodness, this was good!
Can't wait to read the actual chapter!
Looking good so far! I love the story.
Even for a rough draft, it's looking good. Keep it up!
Is this sex.
D'aww.
Oh, we're getting a little more serious now! Good! I was hoping that Twi would be a little more bold.