Finally a short chapter 4 is completed and now on to chapter 5.
Note- Never again will I ever, I repeat ever nay forever write in 1st person. Then again I may just be brash and I will find myself in need of using it again, but for now my preference will remain with 3rd person writing.
For those of you who actually happen to find this. I have not decided to quit FIMfiction and even though there may be one who wishes for me to, its not so.
Improvements since last- *Have gotten the help of two of my good friends to become editors, yes I did not have an editor for the first. *Switching to a different style of fictions- Western Novels
For those of you that have followed the Firemare, even if the book, I find to be a complete bust! Sorry for you, to have been so kind to watch the progression of my first. Some of the many problems: choppiness of a 2nd grader, lacks any interesting material, so why should I continue? I highly doubt anyone will ever even see this post, why I would be so delirious as to write this in the first
For those of you who somehow enjoy the fanfic "The Firemare" I seriously would like to have some criticism. It helps and well shows that I have a chance to improve what may be sloppy.