She used my game as a weakness! O.O; · 10:26pm Sep 20th, 2012
Chapter four notes-
Gave the Ursa Major more lines.
Changed some swears.
Fixed some html. codes.
Biggest fix- 75% of the entire "4th wall braking"? Gone. Completely. I made it so a picture I wanted to use made since but then I realized, if something like that makes an entire story go off track- DON'T DO IT!!
Used Mozilla to point out mistakes. (DOS has Mozilla? BUT CAN'T DOWNLOAD STEAM?! 
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The white pegasus in the purple suit sighed. He was amazed at how much work had to be done. I mean, how didn't he see the obvious walls of text earlier. And when did "pussies" sound like a good idea when "sissies" worked just fine?
Still, the pegasus had a plan. A close friend of his gave him an idea. Using his (unpolished) gaming skillz, he launched a message to the pegasus.
"YO, WAIFU WARDEN!!"
Trixie came down the stairs. "What do you want?"
"I need to potty!"
"Potty?" asked Trixie.
"Yes, potty! I'm a grown stallion, and I refuse to piss myself!"
"A grown stallion who says potty?"
"You know what I mean!" said an embarrassed pegasus.
"Well, say. You like TF2, right?"
"Yeah!" said the pegasus excitedly. He didn't know where she was going with this. Maybe she was gonna get his laptop?
"What is this?" Trixie asked
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"Jarate!" answered the pegasus.
"And what is it?"
"Sniper piss!"
"So, here. I got you this. How about you make your own?" said a satisfied Trixie.
Trixie slid a jar to the pegasus. She went back up the stairs and locked the door.
"Did she just use my own game against me? O.O; DAMN YOU SNIPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!!!" screamed the stallion.
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"Come to think of this, if I'm tied up, how am I gonna get this snazzy suit off so I can pee?"
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"I wonder if that would have went better if I said poo..."
Ha!
Trollixie strikes again
372167
Not funny! It was your idea to ask to go to the bathroom! >:(
372192 Oh, yeah it is.
372193
Well, anymore bright ideas, adaptive?
372197 Maybe... oh! Have you tried reasoning with her? Like, just asking if you can leave. I mean you are a free pony and if she's your waifu then you should be able to convince her to just, you know, let you go and work it out some other time.