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Fluttercheer


Pony Author, Writer of Foal Stories, Storyteller, Equestrian Analyzer and occasional Pony Artist. You can support the stories I tell on Patreon to get nice rewards or tip me on Ko-fi (LINKS BELOW).

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Dec
4th
2016

Chapter 6 of "Aunt Millie" is sneaking up on you: "Morning Business" is here! · 3:55am Dec 4th, 2016

And we continue with "Aunt Millie"! Chapter 6 has left the printing press and is available for your reading pleasure:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/332551/aunt-millie



In this chapter, we have Sparkler being more brash and..... the return of Lily Longsocks! What shenanigans has she in mind this time? Read Chapter 6 to find out!

When writing this chapter, there was one of those moments where I get a spontaneous idea and roll with it, then end up turning it into an interesting plot device that helps deepening the story and fleshing out the characters. I even managed to put it quite subtle, which I'm proud of.
I have also incorporated two things we found out in the show into this chapter, one of which a very subtle reference to an early episode!
Can you spot both?

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