Chapter Two! · 8:39pm Feb 1st, 2012
IT'S DONE! AND IT'S A BEHEMOTH!
19 pages! Hope they were worth the wait!
Yeah, about the chapter; at first, can't say as I was too pleased with the balcony scene, but heck, it's kind of grown on me now.
Felt the need to add some back-story there; I admit it, I've read a couple of "human-in-equestria" stories before, and one thing that always bugged me was "Why aren't you trying to go home?!" So, I think I came up with a plausible reason, no?
And yes, that's my belief about the Apple Family parents. If you don't like it, tough! XP
Hopefully, the wait for chapter 3 shouldn't be anywhere near so long, but don't hold your breath; I am a master procrastinator.