Less and Less detailed · 8:38pm Jan 19th, 2017
As a rookie in writing my stories, I'm not quite sure how to write in detail on how a character does on each chapter I've done. It's not that I couldn't be specific it's just difficult for me to write in details. I only did a few important scenes but the rest is still blank. I'm sorry If I haven't given in much effort on some parts of the chapters but I'm trying my best to improve.
Anywho this is one of the scenes I manage to pull off. The O'l painted cutie mark has been done twice in the series. From chapter 8 The awkward gathering I've written the same thing for Pizza pie, it's in fact her define event of her story (one of her define events).
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As of now, I'll be focusing on the chapters, I'll be looking for a stable proofreader to lend me a hoof and in change for something I could afford assistance too.
