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RaylanKrios


It is a good and noble thing to tell a good story.

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  • 215 weeks
    I'm still here

    It's been a year since I've written anything. But being quarantined has given me some free time. I'm sure most of my followers have left but in case you're also still here a few questions.

    If I gave up any of my unfinished stories for adoption would you want one?

    If I wrote another chapter of something would you read it?

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  • 239 weeks
    Its been awhile and I'm sorry this isn't an update

    I know i haven't been active in a long while, but one thing I appreciate about this community is that it's a safe anonymous space and i have a small situation I'd like y'all's take on.

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    4 comments · 454 views
  • 307 weeks
    Promises now has an audio version

    Promises was my first real story on here, it garnered enough support to let me know my writing had a plae on this website. It's not perfect but I'm still proud of it.

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    0 comments · 465 views
  • 326 weeks
    Overwatch

    Obvious disclosure, this blog has nothing to do with MLP. It’s not a story so it doesn’t violate site rules and it’s something I’ve felt like writing and y’all are my audience for my creative output. If  you don’t like Overwatch and/or don’t care what I have to say move along, I’ll try to have a new chapter of something soon.

    I love Overwatch.

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  • 333 weeks
    Signal boosting some life advice

    There's a blog going around about an incident that occurred at a convention. I'm not of the convention going community so I have no voice in this. It's up to convention goers to decide what type of community they are and how to get there.

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Apr
4th
2017

A word about Authors and Critics · 9:55pm Apr 4th, 2017

(I kinda just want to have 45 blogs, so if you're not interested in my ramblings ignore this.)

I often find myself walking in two worlds on this site. I am an author. I write stories and send them out in to the public in the hopes entertaining people. This means that I both invite and deserve criticism. If I merely wrote for my own enjoyment I would just type into a word document and maybe share it amongst some close friends.

I am also a critic. I've written about this before, but the short version I believe that if you implicitly solicit my opinion then I absolutely have the right to share it, even though it may not be what you hoping to hear.

Lately I've been wrestling with just what the implications of that mean. Peruse enough stories and you're guaranteed to come across some form the archetype debate:

:moustache: Here's what's wrong with your story

:flutterrage: Who the fuck are you to tell me what's wrong with my story.

I understand both of these positions.

I've received criticism, very often it is phrased as fact: "You need to..." "This doesn't work because..." and while I understand that this is simply the most convenient way to express an opinion, I'd be lying if I said that my first thought often wasn't, "Who the fuck are you?" I've written more than a few stories, received a small measure of acclaim etc. So if I don't recognize your name you'd better believe that I'm going to wonder where you derive any authority to suggest I'm wrong.

But at the risk of outing myself as a hypocrite I freely admit to leaving the same type of comments on other people's stories.

Good news: this isn't a rant in either direction. If you leave me any critiques I will consider them, I may disagree with them, but I won't dismiss them. Because I understand what you're doing. My first impulse is often just that, knee jerk. We have to be better than our base instincts.

And if you're an author whom I've left advice for. Just know that I type my opinions as declarations, not because I'm claiming authority, but because it's fewer words.

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Comments ( 3 )

"Who the fuck are you?"

:applecry: ...I-I'll just..:fluttercry: not comment on any stories anymore!:raritycry:

:flutterrage: Who the fuck are you to tell me what's wrong with my story.

It happens to all of us from time to time (heck, even when I'm begging for writing advise my first instinct in the rare blue moon that I actually get it is to do just that -- then I smack my self in the face and try to address it :raritywink:)

You're not wrong to feel this way. I went through it a LOT in one of my stories..... for as you recall, there was one particular reader... we both ended up saying "okay seriously you're taking this wayyyy to far" to.

What was even less funny was that in one of my stories, one of the fimfiction Story Approvers (who I shall not mention because we've basically worked it out though I got uber-annoyed, twice) basically kept telling me to turn my dark adventure back into a slice of life.

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