Why is there no comments? · 7:28pm Jul 2nd, 2017
What is up with all the little to no comments? Of there's no one telling me what I did wrong or how I meant to make it better, how am I going to get better as a writer. Do you like the story, tell me why. Do you hate the story, tell me how to fix it.
I been putting my best foot forward for Ember and Screwball chapters, but even then it seems like it's not good enough. When people don't comment I feel like you all don't like the story in which make it end with being over without ending.
I know most of you are waiting for the harem chapter where he gets with the mares in the story. But that only happens after I finish all the other girls I haven't done which is three. Spitfire, Gabby and Octavia.
It's not hard. I like reading them, and if this is poorly written sorry. I just woke up, I like my mornings slightly disappointing
The chapter was nice probably some people just haven't read it yet.
calm down. Just keep on writing
So far not so bad with the story a few grammatical errors with the syntax and also I've seen some subject verb agreement errors, I just advise proofreading I tend to just read and not leave comments because I can be brutally honest.