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Jay Bear v2


"I know writers who use subtext, and they're all cowards." -- Garth Marenghi

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Jul
6th
2017

New cover art! Also, editing news · 12:51am Jul 6th, 2017

First, check out the sweet new cover art from Cat Scratch Paper!

Second, chapter 7 is pretty close to finished. I'm editing it now, and should have it uploaded by this weekend.

Third, I made an edit to the second chapter ("Attack"). Spoilers for "Attack" ahead: When Rainbow Dash is trying to show off The Adventure Book to Rarity and Fluttershy, the line "Nothing of interest is happening here," was replaced by "There is nothing of interest here." While I've had to make some edits in the past to fix typos or add missing words, I'm generally opposed to rewriting a story while it's in progress. I find it's disrespectful to readers to make them reread a chapter (or several chapters), when the need for the rewrite was a result of the author's poor planning. This change to "Attack" is kind of riding the line, so I'll make it, but I'm flagging it in this blog post rather than asking people to reread "Attack." I'm going to write a short post-mortem about Corrigenda once it's finished, and I'll talk more about what happened there.

Fourth (spoilers for MLP Season 7): Appledad now has a canon name, and Cup Cake has a canon maiden name, which is cool! I'm going to ignore their canon names, though. Another thing for the post-mortem.

Thanks to everyone who's been reading so far. We're at the halfway point now, so I hope you enjoy the rest of the ride!

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