Mistakes? · 2:56am Oct 17th, 2012
A few very persuasive comments by some very smart fellows have made me realise that I rushed the conflict resolution of WIFTR more than I have ever rushed a piece of writing before.
This must be remedied. I like Caramel, and I don't mean to make him a voodoo doll or put him in some kind of Alpha personality-fragment chamber. That being said, his trials aren't over. A happy ending is still on the horizon for him, but that ending has just been teleported a few dozen clicks away.
So, I will now replan, revise, and rewrite, starting from a TBD point in the last chapter.
Ladies and gentlemen, we are far from finished.
Well... Now I need to delete the last chapter from my brain so I don't get confused when the re-write is released.
432400 I should probably get around to deleting that.