Chapter 3 Update

So there were a few complaints about how I didn’t give enough context in chapter 3. I will admit I was just trying to get the chapter out and was still on the high of writing the fight scene.
So, I’ve re-written the ending for chapter 3, adding more context for why the Yvalt Empire’s at war, at least from their perspective. I’ve also increased the amount of time the war’s been going to give me a little more room for certain things to seem plausible in later chapters.
And with this, Work shall re-commence on chapter 4.

So thank you for reading Kalos Challenge and if there are any more errors like this or anything else, feel free to let me know.

Riku.

Comments

[Black Hoof]

That was already good, but it’s even better now!
I am eager to read the next part.