"Dreamwalker Dash" Lifesign: A short teaser of the revision to demonstrate that this story is still kicking. · 4:53pm Jan 15th, 2020
Here is a lifesign from Luna, Rainbow Dash and our new hero Hyper Sonic! The last remaining chapter to be revised is almost done to 2/3 and I should be able to do the rest today in the next few hours. Which means I'll likely be able to republish Chapters 1 - 3 over the course of this week, before a better and rewritten version of Chapter 4 will land here next Wednesday.
To tie you over until then, here is a teaser from the improved Chapter 3:
Luna's horn became surrounded by her midnight-blue aura and the environment began to change. The air around them flickered and where Rainbow Dash could see the dream realm before, fragments of a different place appeared. All around them, small holes opened up in the fabric of the dream realm like windows. Soon, Rainbow Dash recognized the room she could look into now. Blue lockers lined a wall and low, green benches stood opposite of them. Posters hung on the walls, showing pegasi striking cool poses and performing daring maneuvers.
“The locker room of the Wonderbolts Headquarter?” Rainbow Dash's mouth fell open and her eyeballs grew in size.
Luna stood at her side, wordlessly and motionlessly. Her horn was emitting a subtle, dark-purple shine now, almost unnoticeable for the eye. The dream realm had disappeared.
A second later, Rainbow Dash saw herself standing right in front of the lockers. Then her parents suddenly sat on one of the benches, looking at her with unhappy expressions. Lastly, Scootaloo appeared. She was standing at their side, blue saddlebags on her back and a huge camera hanging down her neck. She looked sad.
Feel free to compare this rewritten part with the original part in Chapter 3 while you still can! Progress is going fast now, so you will read more of this story very soon!
Stay easy as a filly!
~ Fluttercheer
Looking forward to see it. And I hope you are well