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Etyco Filly


Just your average Etymologically Correct Filly that equally adores cutesy and/or dramatic romance, as well as horrifying, grimdark tragedies. And any mix of those!

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Jul
11th
2020

Chapter 4 Author's notes · 6:17pm Jul 11th, 2020

Finally a chapter I'm proud of!

It's not that I hate my previous chapters, but this is around the point where my writing really started picking up in quality.

It's also in this chapter I realised I have a pretty good talent for writing horrifying scenes. At least imo, the last scene of the chapter was one of my favourite things I've written (at last this early, there's a scene in chapter 5 that I'm even prouder of, and scenes in chapter 7 that are really cool as well)

Also, another thing I liked a lot about writing this chapter is that I finally had more characters to work with. It's hard to make a character do things without any sort of motivation other than "find my mom lol"

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It's hard to make a character do things without any sort of motivation other than "find my mom lol"

"Gotta find dad"
"Gotta find my son"
Gotta find Bethesda's creative writing.

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Same lol. I kinda wanted to parody it, but without making it a full-on plot element.

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