Fanfic Review: Rainbow’s Dark Orangins 🍊 · 7:51pm May 31st, 2021
Not bad..
Grammar: 2/5 😖
Emotional: 5/5 🤪
Storyline: 4/5 😆
References from other movies/shows: Yes 🧐
Foals! (Idk why but in toca life I played out similar stuff, but the courthouse wasn’t involved. And nothing went too wrong.): 4/5 😎
Back in Gimmel~ Cloudsdale..: 5/5 😆
Tragedy: Doofy vs Dashy: 🌈 wins.
Lucky for Dash, she wasn’t raised by ocelots..
Overall, it’s cool. I’d say 3/5. It’s 1 step above the countless Toca Life tragedies and sad stories that Toca dream, Toca shine or anyone else have.
Rainbow’s mom dies, her dad starts drinking, and hurts Dash, then realises his mistake and visits the psycho psychologist who prescribes illegal drugs and stuff, and promotes this violence, and marries Spectrum unknowingly, so Rainbow runs away and starts living with Comet Blaze, and her actual half-brother Comet Streak (surprisingly he’s not annoying.). And then she meets Soarin, and then the two are instant BFFs. They did everything together until Soarin became a bolt. Then the psycho parents unknowingly have a foal who they almost kill, who a 10th grader Rainbow saves *beaver pops up* whom Rainbow saves and adopts, then Soarin pops back up and helps. And he becomes the Element of Generosity, *figuratively.* and buys baby stuff, and then Spec and Fly kidnap CS, who gets hospitalised thanks to the beatings. And then they all go to court. And then Dash 1, others, a big fat egg and a death sentence for Firefly.
And then in the end the ponyrazzi arrive and question everything. Then Cloud Chaser (the little guy) gets scared, who the two console, and then he thinks of them as his parents. He said it himself. And then, the moment you’ve all been waiting for, 💍👰🤵.
