Question For Readers · 9:32am Jul 30th, 2021
Hello all, followers or not. I'm wanting to thank all who enjoyed Lost and Fucked for the success of reaching front page for me second time. I'm glad many of you enjoyed the story. I come to you today though to ask a few questions and hoping to get answers. This doesn't have to apply directly to Lost and Fucked but can be anything that I have written in the past as well.
What about the story(ies) do you enjoy? Character choice, wording, scenarios, etc...?
Was the release time more preferable as I released it at 11 PM EST (12 AM My time)?
Is there something that you would suggest for improvements?
Is there certain characters that I haven't used yet that you'd seek in a pairing that might be more suitable or do you like having a character where you can insert yourself such as a Nameless guard?
Is there kinks that I'm missing out on that might improve the experience more. I know anal is a prominent thing that I choose as it's one of my favorites to begin with. Is it something you want to see less or more of?
You don't have to respond directly to this blog with comments. I'm happy to take direct DMs so you can remain anon to what you may agree with in my stories. However I would appreciate all the feedback I can get to help improve the future of the stories that I will create. I know I can't please everyone, but at least knowing what I'm doing right and where I can improve helps the most, along with those sharing in groups that I may not be part of or with friends or social circles on discord that I'm not aware of.
Thank you all again as I try to rebuild my life at this time and make changes that I may one day become a full time writer or even most of the time with a part time job. Love all of you my followers and readers. ~Nagiman
I know I am in a minority - but I love your writing and every time it gets filthy - its an absolute gem.
As to the Nameless Guard and other basically anonymous characters, I think it worked in Lost and Fucked. I'm not a fan of 2nd person PoV stories and don't think of such anon's as 'me' when reading, so that style of writing always puts me out. But the Nameless Guard didn't fall into this trap for me as he was just an everypony reacting to Smolder. I think having a pretty blank supporting character can work if the focus is on the main character. Just my opinion.
As for kinks you've only slightly touched, I'm a proponent of xenophiliac Twilight. In canon the only attraction she's shown is to Flash Sentry, some weird hairless ape thing so I've mentally paired her with zebra, griffons, or any other exotic being who'd strike her intellectual fantasy.
Pregnant or chubby have also gotten my attention before, but kinks vary. Don't write what you don't like, I love Rarity but don't like scat/watersports, so I haven't looked at Ivory Throne, it's pretty obviously not for me and that's fine.
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Thank you for the detailed feedback. Having a Placement Character nameless in 3rd person seems to be good instead of just Anon. I like having a some placement for the reader to interject themselves on whatever end they are imagining from. As for Rarity story I do have a piece in the works that isn't part of the Ivory Throne series and would be something you'd read. Can't say date it will be finished as I don't get hours upon hours a day to write.
As for chubby I don't find it to be really a kink and more of a body shape in description, but pregnant is most definitely a fetish be it impregnation or already pregnant. It's one I flip flop on as I'm looking for it, or couldn't really give two flips about but not hating it. As for exotic pairings I know Zebra is one of the most common ones, but I am working on adding in different creatures from across the MLP lore to make things a bit interesting as well.
I would love to see more Shining x luna, or in general dirty things with the princesses