Hello,

Like the title says I would like a little help.
I am working one a story that involves Pound and Pumpkin but they are adults.
Pumpkin has just started her own family and her own bakery when she get a telegram about a family emergency.
She rush home to help, but while back home her brother and her start to have conflict over how to best deal with this emergency.
The story is mostly about a strained relationship that has come up because of the time and distance they have had.
I do not know what to call this story, so I was hoping some one could come up with any ideas?
I would be great full for the help.

By the way the HUB announced that there is going to be a Season 5 of MLPFiM.
It was on Equstria Daily so if you don't believe me go check it out.

Without knowing more about the story, it's difficult to say. One idea: examine your story and pick out a bit of dialog that you particularly like. That dialog might suggest a good title.

2570661 Sometimes I have troubles with the titles too.

The story is mostly about a strained relationship that has come up because of the time and distance they have had

How about something about distance and/or time, then?

I have the temptation to suggest So close, yet so far away because it's one of my favourite stock sentences However, probably there's already one story with that title in the site.

2572973 Thank you for your advice.

2576397 Thank you for your help too.