What I need help with: Pacing, narrative, characterization, consistency, using the same words multiple times, writing a good ending and finding a better title
Summary: Pinkie has Dissociative Identity Disorder and it's up to Twilight and Celestia to help her
Working title: dark side of the pink
Tags: anthro, dark, sad
Word count: 5'019 (incomplete)
What I need help with:
Pacing, narrative, characterization, consistency, using the same words multiple times, writing a good ending and finding a better title
Summary: Pinkie has Dissociative Identity Disorder and it's up to Twilight and Celestia to help her
Rating: teen to mature
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v0GeZn7QkTre9FomssH0J6nHlsy4jhSv5av9AhTPfGQ/edit?usp=drivesdk
Will be posted here and AO3
Pm me if interested