I am wanting more feedback on one of my stories, please remember not to be too harsh, and please, if you tell me to improve don’t tell me what you don’t like about the story, because I am under the impression it is a good story that may need some improvement, but I will no longer be rewriting this story just so it fits in the parameters of what people on this site think a story should be.

TOnline Bullying Is Not Cool

• MLP: FiM
• Drama
• Sad

My name is Little Snow andI’m being bullied online because of my disability with ponies saying that I’m not actually disabled and that I’m just faking it, I keep telling them I am not, but they don’t listen to me, one day it gets so bad that.

• Profanity
• Alt. Universe
• Rainbow Dash
• Apple Bloom
• OC

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