Hi, I’m trying to write a story that DOESN’T revolve around clop. I’m needing help with reviewing and proofreading and editing and just help in generals. Can anyone help?

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Like you need a second set of eyes to take a look at it? I could give you my thoughts if you want.

I warn you, I am a slow reader, but I am polite in giving my opinions.

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Yes, exactly! That would be appreciated. If you are going to proofread and stuff, it's going to be this story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/471143/mlp-fim-the-7th-element-pt1

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Okay, I’ll give it a read!