Stories about Immortality
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Immortality is Bad

This is a folder for storing stories in which immortality is treated as a bad thing on the whole, significantly more curse than blessing. This doesn't include stories of immortality that is horrific in its own right, but rather those in which the message is that immortality should not be desired.

Order: Date Added

TScattered Pages - The Final Twilight
MLP: FiM
Drama
Tragedy
It's been over a thousand years since Twilight lost her friends. Maybe becoming an immortal alicorn was a mistake.
Violence
Death
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Brass Scribe · 7.9k words · 40 4 · 1.1k views
EDiscord Writes a Letter
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
The lord of chaos unleashes his wrath upon unsuspecting parchment.
Discord
8_Bit · 3.3k words · 180 6 · 2k views
ERemember
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Slice of Life
Twilight is given a choice: live forever, or live with the one you love.
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Main 6
Cxcd · 2.5k words · 57 2 · 1.3k views
EA Perfect Day
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Sci-Fi
Fluttershy wakes up to the sound of birdsong and the sight of a beautiful day. But something isn't quite right in Ponyville. Ponies are missing, or suddenly covered in horrible scars. It's up to Fluttershy to solve the mystery.
Fluttershy
Rarity
Shaslan · 6.4k words · 112 3 · 2.1k views
TOne Last Immortal Night
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Shining Armor and Cadance share one last moment together as the twinkle of the aegis dwindles.
Cadance
Shining Armor
Thithle Candytufth · 1.1k words · 27 2 · 1.6k views
THeat Death
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
Discord describes himself in the most cynical, factual way possible.
Fluttershy
Discord
JackRipper · 1000 words · 132 7 · 4k views
TReign
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
Tragedy
Why was the pony given both the rank of 'Princess of Friendship' and immortality?
Suicide / Self Harm
Twilight
Thurnis · 1k words · 11 1 · 891 views
TLegends
MLP: FiM
Dark
Sad
Tragedy
500 years after her last friend passed away, Twilight walks through Ponyville to reflect on her friends' lives.
Suicide / Self Harm
Death
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
OC
Twilight Glimmer · 2.6k words · 58 12 · 2.3k views
TLuster Dawn: New Days of the Magic of Friendship
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Sad
Slice of Life
Twilight wants to break the curse of immortality to pass with her friends. But first she must find a Successor to take her place. Can she do it or does Equestria need her to stay? What tests await candidate Luster Dawn as an ancient villain returns?
Death
Twilight
Starlight Glimmer
Grogar
Luster Dawn
SamSwordsman123 · 126k words · 98 22 · 3.6k views
TMoving on
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Sad
After the loss of her friends.Twilight falls into a deep state of depression.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Luster Dawn
Frosty_Rainbow · 1.3k words · 10 1 · 904 views
EThe Fall of Twilight, The Birth of Midnight
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
With the death of my best friends and my royal advisor, i became depressed for several years. But a voice from my head keeps company during one of my sad moments, and this voice asks me to release my anger.
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
King Sombra
Midnight Sparkle
Twilight Star · 14k words · 44 11 · 4.3k views
TThe Choices You Never Forget
MLP: FiM
Dark
Sad
Tragedy
Celestia reflects on the cyclical nature of her relationships with powerful unicorns and corruption.
Celestia
Subsolar Drift · 4.3k words · 49 7 · 1.1k views
TOnly the Good Die Young
MLP: FiM
Dark
Sad
Immortality isn't all it's cracked up to be. Just ask someone who would know. Like... Apple Bloom, for instance.
Gore
Apple Bloom
Diamond Tiara
Sharp Spark · 5.7k words · 1,202 23 · 13k views
ESunrise
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
Princess Celestia raises the sun
Celestia
Dinkledash · 1k words · 16 1 · 681 views
EThe Last Sunset
MLP: FiM
Dark
Sad
When all is said and done we all must face the consequences of our actions.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
Arceaion · 1.5k words · 46 10 · 1.7k views
EAd Infinitum
MLP: FiM
Sad
Tragedy
The immortal envy the mortal. A goddess seeks an end to her eternity. But who will pay the price.
Celestia
Discord
Muppetz · 2k words · 141 9 · 2.9k views
EReality
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
The question had come out of nowhere that day: Luster was maybe thirteen years old, and her questions seemed endless, yet that day’s question stunned Princess Twilight to the core. “How old are you?”
Twilight
Spike
Luster Dawn
pegiwolf12 · 1k words · 119 15 · 3.4k views
TI Don't Wanna Live Forever
MLP: FiM
Sad
It has been several years since Twilight ascended the throne. Celestia and Luna decide to visit Twilight to see how things are. Things don't go as they expected.
Death
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
Twilight Star · 9k words · 40 14 · 2.7k views
EMoving on
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
After being spotted by the Mane 5 and Sunset Shimmer, the girls wonder if Sonata Dusk is up to anything since she looks so happy. Sunset Shimmer decides to investigate.
Human
Sunset Shimmer
Sonata Dusk
Rated Ponystar · 5.6k words · 217 8 · 5.8k views
TLuster Dawn Friendship Successor
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Slice of Life
Twilight takes in a new student to wield the magic of friendship in the hopes of passing the torch someday. Meanwhile, an ancient villain thought to be long gone sets in motion plans to conquer Equestria. Reposted.
Death
Twilight
Starlight Glimmer
Sunburst
Grogar
Luster Dawn
SamSwordsman123 · 111k words · 57 14 · 1.4k views
TBeginning of Eternity
MLP: FiM
Dark
Sad
The first of them is gone. And as they say… “This is only the beginning.” Twilight.. knows..
Death
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Toriandthehorse · 1.7k words · 77 1 · 2.6k views
TPassing On Together
MLP: FiM
Sad
Tragedy
Determined not to outlive her friends, Twilight decides to get rid of her immortality and find a new ruler of Equestria. Meanwhile, others with long or everlasting lives feel the same way. Reposted
Death
Celestia
Luna
Discord
Main 6
Luster Dawn
SamSwordsman123 · 11k words · 89 27 · 2.7k views
TDear Princess Celestia,
MLP: FiM
Sad
Tragedy
Princess Twilight Sparkle writes letters to her former mentor. Her friend Spike would rather she didn't.
Death
Twilight
Spike
Shakespearicles · 3.1k words · 292 10 · 4.1k views
EOne Last Snap
MLP: FiM
Sad
Discord says goodbye.
Fluttershy
Twilight
Discord
Somber · 3.2k words · 669 13 · 8.5k views

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