ESweet Pepper Drunkenly Rambles About Daring Do

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Sweet Pepper drunkenly rambles about Daring Do

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Twinsez · 1.6k words  ·  39  0 · 471 views

Review: Sweet Pepper Drunkenly Rambles About Daring Do.

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Summary: Sweet Pepper is drunk and talks about Daring Do in a drunk way.

Critic:  I never knew the background for Sweet Pepper. I clearly think it’s probably a rare background ponies that weren’t too much in the spot like most popular background ponies are like Dr. Whooves, Derpy, Vinyl, Octavia and others like Sweetie Drops and Lyra. But the best thing about this fiction is that it's almost like a Berry Punch.

The story is great and all but there are some few errors that I noticed a little bit and believe me i’m sure people might not get it but they will know soon…   1 poor word choices and 5 punctuation errors.

Does this fiction live up to the expectations… Well yes I believe that this is 2 steps away from being a master fiction.  The details of this fiction and the feeling of Sweet Pepper makes me wanna go back to MLP and find this background character.

This fiction flow is great with that 10/10

Idea that I never seen before in my life with a different background character.  10/10

The word choices could be spot on which makes me want to see more of this. 9/10

And finally the last but not least it's 8.5/10 for grammar. 

37.5//40  so this means somewhere at least a 9/10 for me.

However, this is odd though because it also has a little bit of a slice of life.