ELuna's Bad Day

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Random
• Slice of Life

Don't talk to her, she angy

• Luna
• OC

NightFurySpeedey8156 · 1.3k words  ·  22  3 · 1.1k views

Review: Luna’s Bad Day

Tags: Comedy, Random, Slice of Life

Summary: Luna’s bad day (bad fur day but mlp rating pg version)

Review: 

This is beautiful. I already read this and I do have to say it is the most wonderful fiction that my eyes laid on.  It has the greatest comedy that I have ever read in that 2021 year.  And I believe this is complete so this is a full review.

The sad thing about this is nothing… There is no sad thing about this… It’s complete, that's what it is!!!.

As for story ideas, flow, fleshed out, and organized…As well it’s doing pretty good I hope that this fiction gets a lot of respect.

I do like Luna in this fiction. It made me laugh a lot. 

And so as I read this in 2022 I still feel the same way about it… and that feeling is at least a 10/10

That’s how good this fiction is.

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Still kinda needs an editor.

7735783
that is true it does need that... but... it's original.

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Lots of fanfics are. Sans the ones that are actually plagiarized or copied

This is the author here. Thanks for the review and praise! I will admit it has a few bumps in it, but I think it's a good story overall. I'm glad you saw it and enjoyed it too, it makes me happy to see that this story is getting some attention.

(Btw, I may be turning this into a 4 part series of all the princesses.)