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Review: A TRue Person

Tags: Gore, Violence, Dark, Adventure

Summary: a human goes to a new world well it’s an Isakei?

Review: the flow is good, and the idea is very good I love it.  However, it’s still incomplete but so far I like to say this is a good fiction so far… I won't tell any details of the fiction but I like to say my favorite part was chapter one… and so it begins the adventure :3 lol yeap this is truly a person who knows Isakei!!!  Ok then well I know how to rate this for sure… it’s a 7/10 I just don’t know the ending of this yet so… it’s still incomplete.

The grammar is also good as well so far.