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Just says that Princess Twilight a day after her Coronation Ceremony sat in her throne with Magma Burn at her side as as Commander in Chief of all the Armed Forces of Equestria.

"Princess Twilight Sparkle. If you please." Magma Burn exclaimed with a bow and Twilight gave him a nod before turning to his personal adviser. "Spike why don't you go into the kitchen for some of your gem cupcakes okay?" As Spike gets off his seat and into the royal kitchens, he heard Twilight call out. "Oh and your free for the rest of day! Thanks!"

"So what is this plan of yours Magma Burn? And can you pull this off?" Twilight asked.

"Of course oh royal highness Princess Twilight. You are after all the Supreme Ruler of all Equestria and what we have to do is to solidify your image as such so that the morals and values surrounding the Magic of Friendship will spread everywhere. Peace and Prosperity for all under your rule. Now we just need to let everyone know that Princess." Magma Burn answered as he pulls out a blueprint for what would be called the Friendship Rulership Plan.


This song plays in the background as the next day as your OC was chilling, he or she noticed thousands and thousands of chariots fly off into the sky as well as airships being driven by the royal guards from Canterlot as well as the Batpony Night Guards, Crystal Empire Guards as well as all units of the Equestrian Police Force. Before you know it Posters of Princess Twilight like these were put on every wall of every house and business structure, not to mention statues of Princess Twilight was being erected all over Ponyville and Canterlot as well as billboards and electronic monitors that would show the Princess announcements, not to mention the carriages that roam around each city and town of Equestria with speakers and radios for everypony and everycreature in their homes as if Twilight is putting herself in their own homes herself so that they could tune in to the broadcast.

Everyone is safe after all but what caught the ponies and creatures of guard is the mass mobilization of ponies wearing uniforms like these for the so called New Model Army, checkpoints are being built as well as walls and barbed wire for protection, a massive mountain mansion has been built for Twilight, A gigantic military fortress in the middle of the Everfree Forest but most of all the shocker was all young colts and stallions were now required to be recruited in this New Model Army

If JNKing is reading this, Kodo and Celine were surprised as a large crowd of ponies looking like delegates from Canterlot escorted by earth ponies, unicorns and pegasi of the royal guard, batponies of Luna's former night guard and guards from the crystal empire sticking on posters of Princess Twilight in every walls of the Diamond Dog Mines as well as statues of her made of gold, silver, bronze, diamond and stone, radios were installed as well as Friendship Journals distributed everywhere just like in the episode Fame and Misfortune including in the headquarters of the Union of Knights over in Canterlot and inside the base where Luco and his dragons operate, even Diamondback's Office as the New Equestria undergoes what ponies and creatures called Twilification.


Back in Canterlot Princess Twilight was dressed in a elaborate fur lined royal coat as well as her dress ever filling up with trinkets jewelry and necklace of made of gold, silver, diamond as well as a scepter and a crown filled to the brim with gold, silver, diamond as well as assorted types of rubies and gemstones. "Looking magnificent as ever Princess Twilight Sparkle. Truly the definition and look of a royal alright. Peace and Friendship will now be the face of Equestria and its new order which means that chaos and disharmony are then set aside and forbidden to use unless it is for good and you have to sign a lot of documents and have them approved making creatures like Discord and Luco disappointed.

The next week was shown to have a montage of Princess Twilight becoming ever the more eager to make her speeches every single day with ponies that can attend have to attend as well as more military parades in her honor bearing the new colorful and elaborate uniforms, seeking new deals, making trades as doing business as usual but with Twilight slapped into it for the exchange that her name as to be spread everywhere far and wide with Equestria starting to look like a authoritarian police state but in a more peaceful manner and with Magma Burn just sniffing the air with joyous glee.


"Oh yes.... yes.... Yes.... How I love this new Equestria...." Magma Burn exclaimed one morning with a large smile that would might as well make his mouth sore as the stallion draws the attention to him twirling his right hoof all around like he was conducting an orchestra as the stallion dances in the hallways of the Canterlot Castle while being saluted by the soldiers of his New Model Army even throwing his hat using his left hoof and catching it using his right one. "Now Equestria will truly live in the Magic of Friendship and there would be no more problems and chaos. My vision indeed!" Magma thought. "And who knows? I might be appointed King of Equestria someday! The most colorful elegant uniform wearing king that is." Magma grinned as he passed by the hallways making the rest of the Mane 6 praise him more since he made them famous and rich like Princess Twilight especially Rarity who he gave a bag of bits before dancing on his way to breakfast.

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"Of course oh royal highness Princess Twilight. You are after all the Supreme Ruler of all Equestria and what we have to do is to solidify your image as such so that the morals and values surrounding the Magic of Friendship will spread everywhere. Peace and Prosperity for all under your rule. Now we just need to let everyone know that Princess." Magma Burn answered as he pulls out a blueprint for what would be called the Friendship Rulership Plan.

Before he can show the blueprint to her, Kyan tapped Magma Burn's shoulder before pointing at the portal screen.

Kyan: Hey, Magma Burn... am I seeing Luster Dawn is having a date with another stallion?

Magma Burn's eyes widened as he saw his crush dating another unicorn stallion named Amgam Nrub who look like Magma Burn but with red coat and orange mane.

Luster Dawn: Oh, Amgam! You are sweet guy! Too bad that no-good ex-boyfriend focus too much on bringing so-called "peace" to Equestria cause he wouldn't let go of his grudge toward bullies and I feel he neglected me too much... I glad I met a stallion like you who cares and loves me and not focus on his petty conquest like Magma Burn! He wasn't a stallion he like think of himself!

Amgam Nurb: Don't worry, my honey... I will do one thing Magma Burn couldn't do.

Luster Dawn: What's that?

He kneed on his knee before opening a box to reveal a beautiful ring.

Amgam Nurb: Luster Dawn, will you marry me?

She nodded rapidly.

Luster Dawn: Yes, I do! I rather spend the rest of my life with you!

They proceed of making loves in front of Magma Burn who is shocked to see his crush saying yes to the marriage proposal.

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Just says that Princess Twilight a day after her Coronation Ceremony sat in her throne with Magma Burn at her side as as Commander in Chief of all the Armed Forces of Equestria.

She wouldn't be alone; Princess Star Wing would have assumed the role Princess Luna had as Second in Command, and would be right by her side, with Spike the only thing between Princess Twilight and Princess Star.

"So what is this plan of yours Magma Burn? And can you pull this off?" Twilight asked.

"Of course oh royal highness Princess Twilight. You are after all the Supreme Ruler of all Equestria and what we have to do is to solidify your image as such so that the morals and values surrounding the Magic of Friendship will spread everywhere. Peace and Prosperity for all under your rule. Now we just need to let everyone know that Princess." Magma Burn answered as he pulls out a blueprint for what would be called the Friendship Rulership Plan.

Star pulled the blueprint over and read through it with a hum. "Interesting... very interesting... oh, not too bad on the designs..." She hummed. "Yeah, I can see this working out. Just a few minor revisions should make it perfect."

From there, Star would pretty much keep Magma and Twilight from going too overboard with the whole thing. She'd have them lead the poster campaign personally, with all three of them making a special appearance to Celine (who was the new Alpha of the Diamond Dogs). They'd have a warm welcome with her and a show of unity, before several diamond dog guards joined the small army that Star, Twilight and Magma had. From there, the trio would venture over Equestria, gathering supporters and showing they were aligned with the leaders of the different factions; from the new Queen Skystar of the Hippogriffs to Queen Aquamarine of the Changelings to King Gallus of the Griffons to even Dragon Lord Blaze of the Dragons.

However, any who opposed them or tried anything funny - like a rogue pack of diamond dogs or a snippy dragon like Garble, for instance - were met with swift and harsh retaliation. Twilight, Star and Magma fought like a cohesive unit, bringing down any naysayers and showing that they didn't need an army to kick tail.

It wasn't Twilification, but it was Harmonization.


In Canterlot, Star was sleeping with her harem of lovers, before Twilight knocked on her door.

"Star, get dressed," Twilight said. "We've got a big day ahead of us."

Stretching, Star rose, gently entwining Blizzard Ice and Red Star Jin (who had been clinging to her) around each other before dressing herself. She came out garbed in midnight black dragon scale armor, topped with a blue and white royal fur coat. Diamonds speckled her armor and cloak to resemble the night sky, and she twirled a sword that doubled as a staff.

"Looking good, Twi," Star noted flirtatiously. "You know, my harem is always eager for newcomers. I wouldn't mind peeling you out of that uniform myself."

"Oh, Star," Twilight chuckled, lightly swatting her friend's shoulder. "You always have the strangest things to say."

"And you love it," Star replied with a laugh.

At that moment, Magma arrived. "Looking good, my princesses. Truly the definition and look of a royal alright. Peace and Friendship will now be the face of Equestria and its new order which means that chaos and disharmony are then set aside and forbidden to use unless it is for good and you have to sign a lot of documents and have them approved making creatures like Discord and Luco disappointed."

Star groaned at the mention of paperwork. "Ugh, paperwork. Tell me there's some big threat we can fight instead. I'm dying for some action."

Twilight chuckled. "I'll bet Luna thought the same thing. Though, I don't think that's going to be happening for a while."

Star shrugged. "Well, then, might as well get the boring stuff over with. Either of you want to join me for a sparring session later?"

After Magma gave his response and Twilight likely politely declined, the three went on to do their jobs, all safe and happy in the knowledge that what they were doing was protecting Equestria.

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My Sunset: *Find Magma and drags him to the cliff*

P/S: I honestly don't like that Spike's appearance :ajsleepy:

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P/S: I honestly don't like that Spike's appearance

Kind of agree; I like that he's bigger and more muscular, but for some reason, the medallion or whatever's around his neck ruins it for me. I don't know why, it just feels like a very odd addition.

What doesn't work for you? If we got to redesign him, what would you do differently?

I'm genuinely curious because I've been watching a couple of videos where these guys redesign characters.

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Because I feel like this is more human, not dragon. If I choose Spike grows up fit, I like the Vavacung version though.

This is Spike, not Hercules in Disney :raritydespair:

Sometime I though Hasbro hate him a lot since they ruined him a lot of times, leave his character into incompleted forever and now, they ruin his apperance.

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True.

Also, Vavacung? You mean like this?

It's what came up when I googled Vavacung.

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Yep. Aww.. my favorite ship. I though I forgot this thing.

Lightning spit her orange juice, not knowing that she had done so right in Dark’s face.

“But, I haven’t told you the news yet!” he said, surprised.
“Oh, sorry. It was the Twilight posters..”
(Is this before or after the last problem?)

“I came to tell you. Most, if not all males above 15 have to be in the royal guard! Although I’m half-bat, I’m no exception.”

“All right, let’s go to a bigger cloud.” said the teal pony as they shifted to a nice big cloud. “Anyway, WHAT?!?! Do you know Princess Luna by any chance?” she asked. Dark Wing shook his head. “But I know they’re at Silver Shores.”
“Good, then we better get them here. Honestly.. I don’t want to lose you..” said Lightning with a small blush. Normally she’d have gagged at her cheesy line, but she let it slip.
“Me neither..” said Dark and hugged her tightly.

The two caught a train to Silver Shores, explained everything to the princesses, and
one day later..

“TWILIGHT SPARKLE!!!!”

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Star pulled the blueprint over and read through it with a hum. "Interesting... very interesting... oh, not too bad on the designs..." She hummed. "Yeah, I can see this working out. Just a few minor revisions should make it perfect."

"Thanks so much for doing this with me Star." Magma said with a smile as he puts a hoof on Star's shoulder. "To be honest, I'm just into the new uniforms and being a big fan of Rarity's designs and Twilight's work over the years. I didn't want to make it look like that we are authoritarian, Guess I just enjoyed the military parades and all. Well that and giving Tempest a new job." Magma waved at his friend and Tempest waved back before blowing her whistle, a group of students from the School of Friendship in their PE shirts jogging around and doing pushups before settling down to have breakfast.

However, any who opposed them or tried anything funny - like a rogue pack of diamond dogs or a snippy dragon like Garble, for instance - were met with swift and harsh retaliation.

"And by that, I mean Community Service. Got to have someone cleaning the streets of Canterlot am I right?" A news reporter asks Star Wing as she pointed to Garble, Spot, Fido, Rover, Wind Rider, Suri Polimare as well as the brothers Flim and Flam. "I think even the offenders are learning their lesson. Magma Burn told me that they're willing to keep out of trouble after they started getting paid for this new job. Is this all your idea Princess Star Wing?"

In Canterlot, Star was sleeping with her harem of lovers, before Twilight knocked on her door.

"Star, get dressed," Twilight said. "We've got a big day ahead of us."

Stretching, Star rose, gently entwining Blizzard Ice and Red Star Jin (who had been clinging to her) around each other before dressing herself. She came out garbed in midnight black dragon scale armor, topped with a blue and white royal fur coat. Diamonds speckled her armor and cloak to resemble the night sky, and she twirled a sword that doubled as a staff.

"Hehehe... They say that you've been hanging around Magma for too long and been keeping company... Teacher..." Luster Dawn smirked as she put a hoof on Star Wing's cheek to face her. "Tell me... What lessons did you teach that Big Boy Princess...? The student mare asked as she twirled a hoof on her chest by the black dragon scale armor. "Teach me more of this... 'Magic' Princess."

Star shrugged. "Well, then, might as well get the boring stuff over with. Either of you want to join me for a sparring session later?"

After Magma gave his response and Twilight likely politely declined, the three went on to do their jobs, all safe and happy in the knowledge that what they were doing was protecting Equestria.

"Oh I think I have some business to attend to..." Magma Burn exclaimed with a smug and cheeky grin. "Very important business..."

Later on, Magma was seen inside another base facing Luco, Jackknife, Swift Winds, Diamondback and Blazing Phoenix wearing aNapoleon style military uniform. (Play at 0:55 for the scene)


(Play at 0:29 for the scene.)

"HAH!!! Look at you Luco!!! Look at my colorful military uniform!!! Look I have become terrifically successful!!! And what are you?? A pathetic stooge!!! Now bow down to me and kiss my right hoof!!!" Magma exclaimed with a cheeky grin. "I did it!! I did it!!! I won!!! I won!!! Order in Equestria and no more chaos!!!" Magma thought as if an excited angel bunny was bouncing around inside him making his heart race, thinking that he had finally won between him and Luco's quote on quote 'Rivalry' as he flaunts around in his new uniform.

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Magma Burn told me that they're willing to keep out of trouble after they started getting paid for this new job. Is this all your idea Princess Star Wing?"

"I may have offered the idea," Star admitted. "But we're a team. Princess Twilight and Commander Magma Burn and I worked together to come up with a good plan for keeping the peace."

"Tell me... What lessons did you teach that Big Boy Princess...?

"Whoa-ho," Star teased, gripping Luster's hoof. "Luster, I thought you were with Magma." A thought made her face brighten. "But the three of us together... hm... I'd admit, that would be quite the 'lesson,' wouldn't it?"

Later on, Magma was seen inside another base facing Luco, Jackknife, Swift Winds, Diamondback and Blazing Phoenix

Diamondback and Swift were standing at attention, while Jackknife and Blaze just looked irritated. Luco, for his part, just looked amused.

"HAH!!! Look at you Luco!!! Look at my colorful military uniform!!! Look I have become terrifically successful!!! And what are you?? A pathetic stooge!!! Now bow down to me and kiss my right hoof!!!"

Swift and Diamondback exchanged glances, before Swift started to kneel. However, Jackknife gripped their napes, while Luco sighed.

"Unsportsmanlike conduct is unbecoming of you," Luco replied. "And pride must come before the fall." He tsked. "It's really a shame... you did seem to make something very special here." His grin widened. "Too bad your attitude is making me want to burn it all down."

"You?" Blaze scoffed, before lunging forward. Her fire clashed against Magma's... well magma, and produced an explosion.

When Magma shook off the lights from the explosion, he found his rival gone and the base destroyed. All that was left was a note from Luco.

See you soon. :raritywink:

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"Whoa-ho," Star teased, gripping Luster's hoof. "Luster, I thought you were with Magma." A thought made her face brighten. "But the three of us together... hm... I'd admit, that would be quite the 'lesson,' wouldn't it?"

"I know Star... But you got to agree that Magma Burn has quite the muscle..." Luster sighs as she pulls out a picture of her coltfriend and starts to caress him. "Perhaps you can teach this student new tricks... After all, Your the one that taught mom and dad how to do it right?" Luster asked Star as she gives her a framed picture of Luster Dawn with her mom and dad Starlight and Sunburst.
"Unsportsmanlike conduct is unbecoming of you," Luco replied. "And pride must come before the fall." He tsked. "It's really a shame... you did seem to make something very special here." His grin widened. "Too bad your attitude is making me want to burn it all down."

"You?" Blaze scoffed, before lunging forward. Her fire clashed against Magma's... well magma, and produced an explosion.

When Magma shook off the lights from the explosion, he found his rival gone and the base destroyed. All that was left was a note from Luco.
"W.. What? Wait...!! Wait....!!! WAIT!!! WAIT!!! LUCO?? LUCO COME BACK!!!! You know that I was just playing around right?? I was just joking!!! Luco??? LUCOO!!! PLEASE COME BACK!!!! LUUUUUUUUUUUUUCOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!"

"I was just joking around earlier... I just wanted to drink with you and your dragons.... Luco.... Noo....." Magma Burn cried as he clutched the note and held it near to his chest.

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"I know Star... But you got to agree that Magma Burn has quite the muscle..." Luster sighs as she pulls out a picture of her coltfriend and starts to caress him. "Perhaps you can teach this student new tricks... After all, Your the one that taught mom and dad how to do it right?" Luster asked Star as she gives her a framed picture of Luster Dawn with her mom and dad Starlight and Sunburst.

Star hummed wistfully. "A fine couple, that," she said with a grin. "Alright, 'Lust'er, looks like you're in luck. Professor Star Wing, Love-anomics is in the house, and class is in session." She pulled Luster back into her room.

"I was just joking around earlier... I just wanted to drink with you and your dragons.... Luco.... Noo....." Magma Burn cried as he clutched the note and held it near to his chest.

"Oh, was that all?" Luco asked, peering over Magma's shoulder. "My goodness, my friend, it's either one extreme or the other with you, isn't it?" He tittered as he motioned to his note. "All I said was 'see you soon.' And look at that, I saw you soon." Luco laughed, before waving to Diamondback. "Diamondback, be a dear and clean this up."

Diamondback scoffed. "Deer don't clean up after themselves, darling," she noted, before grinning and letting a pair of antlers form on her head. "Lucky for you, I'll be the exception," she proceeded to rebuild the bunker, all while looking like a gem studded deer.

"Jackknife?" Luco declared. "Drinks all around!"

Jackknife proceeded to pour fire whisky for Luco and a donut smoothie for Magma.

"A toast," Luco declared. "To keeping each other on our toes. Order's great, but a little chaos spices things up like sprinkles on a donut."

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