Hey all, I'm looking for some feedback and commentation for my story Üā Sūt Cktüis (How to be Dragon). I really love comments on world building, theories on the many many chekhov's gun I like to 'hide,' or my arch-nemesis HOMOPHONES!!!! Thanks in advance!

TÜā Sūt Cktüis (How to be Dragon)

• MLP: FiM
• Dark
• Adventure
• Drama

After failing to teach Spike how to fly Twilight asks for Dragon Lord Ember help fill in her gaps of 'dragonish' knowledge. Whom Ember sends in response will send shock waves through Equestria and beyond...

• Sex
• Gore
• Profanity
• Alt. Universe
• Twilight
• Spike
• OC
• Dragons

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