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My second review and again, I'm wondering if I managed to shake off the rust... The last review, I was most definitely proud of myself seeing how far I've gotten in the reviewing scene. If any of you wish to see a link to the reviews in questions, don't worry, I'll always link them below if you're ever curious about it. Now with that out of the way, I shall now review the story that was second place in a writing contest for the D'aww award called Scribblefest. Mind you, this is the first time

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TA Different Kind of Treasure

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Adventure
• Drama

What's the most valuable treasure in the world: Family? Money? Revenge? Love? Depends on who you ask...

• Alt. Universe
• OC
• Flitter and Cloudchaser
• Cloudchaser
• Flitter

Mechawrecker · 62k words  ·  88  4 · 1.4k views

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TDeath of a Queen

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Dark
• Adventure

Chrysalis had welcomed the end, but one final visitor forces her to reconsider.

• Violence
• Death
• Twilight
• Celestia
• Luna
• Chrysalis

Arkane12 · 153k words  ·  324  13 · 5.4k views

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EFalling Up

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Slice of Life

After an accident leaves Songbird unable to fly, it takes a few encouraging words from her marefriend to lift her up again.

• Coloratura
• Songbird Serenade

Emotion Nexus · 1.3k words  ·  44  2 · 731 views

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TLove Letter

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Drama
• Slice of Life

I used to be a young and naive young mare like you both, and I'm writing this for you.

• Non-con
• OC

Nailah · 5k words  ·  20  1 · 321 views

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I'll be going through my off-site review blogs over the next few days and weeks, and leaving comments on the appropriate fics here. I used to do this as a matter of course, then for various reasons (many my own fault) I let it slip. So please don't be too startled if you get a notification for a review I wrote many months ago! I will try to keep up much better in future.

So I'm looking for someone to give me a general review of chapters I wanna release, to just inform me if what I wrote was both cohesive and entertaining. Just reply to this post saying you're interested.

It's been a long as ever hiatus, I know. I just up and walked away from one review board and refused an invitation from two others. Honestly, depression and anxiety create a massive problem at times, but hey, I'm at a place in my life where, now, I feel comfortable taking requests. Now, I'll take a few per week, if anyone is looking for my reviews these days.

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TFriendship Is Magic - Extended Cut

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Mystery

Season 1, Episodes 1 and 2 of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic rewritten and expanded as a mature fantasy adventure.

• Violence
• Death
• Alt. Universe
• Twilight
• Spike
• Celestia
• Nightmare Moon
• Main 6

AdmiralSakai · 112k words  ·  173  7 · 3.1k views

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Did you think this would be a review of me, Bad Dragon, as a person?

You are mistaken.

It's actually a review of this story:

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Then again, I am what I write, so maybe when my story gets reviewed, I get reviewed in turn.

Anyways, here is the said review:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213901/my-little-reviews-feedback/thread/531245/review-bad-dragon

The Wayfarers is one of those stories that could have made it big were it not for some small details. The characters are interesting, the conflicts realistic, and the writing, though not perfect, is very readable.

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A short rather sweet little story. Celestia, after receiving so many friendship letters from Twilight, sends one back to her. Letting her favorite pupil know just how much she means to the Princess. How much Celestia cherishes her own friendship with her pupil.

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Title: Under a Luminous Sky
Author: Jake The Army Guy
Genre: Murder Mystery
Word Count: 99k

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I spend a decent amount of my time on this site reviewing other people's stories, rather than writing my own. I've noticed that I don't always get notified when people respond to my critiques, and I'm interested in seeing how the authors and stories I've reviewed have progressed. To that end I'm going to compile a list of all the stories I've reviewed so that I can better keep track of them. I'm making this list in blog form so that anyone who is interested can go and read any of my reviews at

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Saying Goodbye. Something that is much easier said then done; even though to do it, it must be said.

In this 13 chapter story, we are treated to a unique crossover that lacks the usual intense action, romance, and inter-genre awkwardness. No, this story is one of the few crossovers that gets it right, in my opinion.

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So here we are. We've got the Nightmare Rarity this arc has been promising. With two issues left, I'd say we've got a pretty good setup for a team of writers to deliver a well-paced final battle that actually spans an entire issue this time before a logical, reasonable, satisfying conclusion.

I wonder what they'll do instead.

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There was a hole here. It's gone now.
The incursion to the moon has failed. Luna retreated like a craven while the others were captured. It's time to put an end to it. Let's see if we're going to get answers to all our questions, like...

Will Nightmare Rarity ever get off her ass and do something? Will Celestia come down with yet another bout of Worf Flu? Will Spike finally confess to Rarity? What in Tartarus's name is a chameleon slug?

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Hello and sit down.

I, me, Wraithy, TheWraithWirter, have recently read five stories. Some I liked, some I didn't quite like, and most I screamed at. Here they are in the order I read them. (I think)

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