It's been a long as ever hiatus, I know. I just up and walked away from one review board and refused an invitation from two others. Honestly, depression and anxiety create a massive problem at times, but hey, I'm at a place in my life where, now, I feel comfortable taking requests. Now, I'll take a few per week, if anyone is looking for my reviews these days.
I'll be going through my off-site review blogs over the next few days and weeks, and leaving comments on the appropriate fics here. I used to do this as a matter of course, then for various reasons (many my own fault) I let it slip. So please don't be too startled if you get a notification for a review I wrote many months ago! I will try to keep up much better in future.
So I'm looking for someone to give me a general review of chapters I wanna release, to just inform me if what I wrote was both cohesive and entertaining. Just reply to this post saying you're interested.
My second review and again, I'm wondering if I managed to shake off the rust... The last review, I was most definitely proud of myself seeing how far I've gotten in the reviewing scene. If any of you wish to see a link to the reviews in questions, don't worry, I'll always link them below if you're ever curious about it. Now with that out of the way, I shall now review the story that was second place in a writing contest for the D'aww award called Scribblefest. Mind you, this is the first time
Cloudchaser and Flitter are a couple of treasure hunters, but their lives change when they meet Skyfall who encourages them form a trio. This is a romance, an adventure, and a drama all rolled up into one fic.
Chrysalis has done a great many terrible things to Equestria, all in the name of greed and hunger both. Now she has a chance to make up for perhaps her greatest crime: The murder of Princess Celestia. How can she make up for that? By saving her life.
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It’s a first person narrative, from Cozy Glow’s point of view. There’s a twist. It’s not pony Cozy Glow. Nope. This is EqG Mirrorverse Cozy Glow, and the author explores her mind with detail and care. It’s a story about revenge, about regret, and about learning. Eventually.
A sweet little vignette about Rara and Songbird, after Songbird’s return performance following a not-so-brief stint on medical leave.
A letter from a mother to her daughters, detailing a troubled past and a happy ending.
Did you think this would be a review of me, Bad Dragon, as a person?
You are mistaken.
It's actually a review of this story:
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Then again, I am what I write, so maybe when my story gets reviewed, I get reviewed in turn.
Anyways, here is the said review:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213901/my-little-reviews-feedback/thread/531245/review-bad-dragon
... Gah! %#*yay you life!
Okay, so I stumbled upon this Fic titled, the pride of the apples, which has one f the best... Low functioning autistic, low high, high low... I'll find better terminology for the actually unappreciated review, but overall one of my favorite open autistic characters in fiction. So much so that if I ever did a top ten favorite ASD list, this Cal would probably be on it.
So for those of you who don't know, I like reviewing stuff. I do it a fair bit for the Writeoff Association, where I like to think I have a reputation for going into way too much depth in my reviews and just rambling on for more words than the story I'm reviewing. For a long time, I've been uhming and ahing about writing reviews outside those competitions, not quite sure if it felt quite right to provide the same sort of feedback outside of a workshop-like environment.
This is a story that will certainly be of epic length upon completion. And it is an interesting read. The story has many original elements and deeply disturbed characters, and once you start reading it does pull you in. Maybe you have to force yourself to read the first half chapter or so, because there’s a lot of new ideas to digest, but once you get into the groove of things it’s easy to keep going. And because this story has so much at stake, it's only fair that I should warn you about the
The Motion of the Stars
Author: Carabas
Genre: Post-apocalyptic quest.
Word Count: 14k
Synopsis: Once upon a time, Equestria burned in the fires of war.
Now it falls on two sisters to reclaim what they can.
Go easy on me this is my 1st review so please bear with me:
This was a good episode it wasn't the greatest or the worst episode in the entire series.
. The Good:
1st. The writers gave a heck of a nod to the fandom
2nd. Patton Oswalt was an awesome addition to the overall cast
3rd. AAn evil plot to get a rare item
The Bad:
This is indeed the story I said I absolutely love. That was an understatement, I adore this story due to all of its painfully awkward quirks. Let me say that while I honestly thought this story was ironic when I read it, that doesn't mean there aren't good aspects to it, as odd as that may sound in the next few minutes.
This review is of My Story by Falloutgamer514
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