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Bandy


Everyone's* Favorite Author | Iced Ko-Fi, scalding glances

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She said she would be back at nine, but that time has long since come and passed. My only company now is the bottle, and the drunken silence that fills it.

Based off a prompt, courtesy of the Jazzy Fillyfoolers.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

You magnificent bastard.

2510444
You have indeed read his book.

What a vivid picture! I quite enjoyed the thick atmosphere you drew here. The bit about the picture was my favorite. :twilightsmile:

One embarrassing typo: "just to the cock's left" I, uh, I assume you mean 'clock?' :twilightsheepish:

2510444 :D

2511024 Nope, I totally meant cock Thank you for pointing that out.

I like it. Short, sad, and sexy as always. Keep up the good work!:twilightsmile:

The vivid imagery was very well done. I especially enjoyed the use of dictation. It made for a very smooth and intriguing read.

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