When Rainbow Dash wakes up tired one morning little does she know that her life is about to be turned upside down. When she discovers the truth she is left with a very difficult decision to make that will affect the rest of her life. Should she focus only on her needs or does she take a wider view and possibly sacrifice everything she has worked so hard to achieve. Should she listen to her friends? What will they think of her when she finally decides?
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This fic is so good
I wonder what chapter we'll find out who ruffied Dash.
Go through this chapter and fix your use of y'all.
As a southerner it's a pet peeve when peeps use y'all inappropriately. It takes me out of the story and is confusing.
Ya = You.
Y'all = You all.
You only use y'all when talking to multiple people. I don't know if you do the same mistake in later chapters. But it's something that I ask you to please fix up.
My other problem with this fic is that no one is actually "Talking to Rainbow Dash". They are all to busy saying how wrong she is. Are you ever going to have them shut up and listen to the fact that Rainbow Dash in all of her recollections never went that far with a Stallion? Are you ever going to address the fact that she was either raped and suppressed the memories or was drugged then raped? And the emotional repercussions of such a thing?
I've read 10 chapters waiting for it to come up. And now I'm off to the other chapters.
Ok Seriously. Rainbow Dash just said that she has no idea how she got pregnant. She's admited that she's never gone that far with a Stallion. Yet Twilight just throws blame at Rainbow Dash.
I asked in Chapter 10. I'll ask here. Are you going to address this? Or is this fic basically everypony tearing the shit out of Rainbow Dash and treating her like she's a villian? Is everyone going to sit down. Address the fact that the children were born against Rainbow Dash's will. And the fact that a child born of rape is more likely going to be abused or resented? Or the fact that this has alot of changes to Rainbow Dash's life beyond whether to keep the foal.
Yes she hasn't been keeping an open mind. But everyone so far has been ignoring the facts and basically demonizing Rainbow Dash out of context. It angers me. But I'm willing to see what happens next. I just want to know if you're going to address those huge problems in this fic?
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Sorry if I'm leaving you in suspense for so long. The resolution as to what actually happened is coming in the next couple of chapters, I just had to get a lot of stuff dealt with first. I will also be going back and redoing small parts of the story as well as a few bits irk me slightly. Don't worry, all will be revealed.
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Glad you like it. ^^
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Awesome. And will the others start being you know. Less accusatory of Dash, and sit down. Talk about "How it happened" (Dash says she doesn't know), discuss actual choices (before abortion. I'll admit that I'd like the abortion to not happen. A lot of women when they get it live in regret for doing it, and it leaves psychological scars. But its still something that Dash should not be pressured into doing or not doing.). Then you know be there for her?
Or all of the Mane 6 going to be busy throwing their judgement on her without talking like adults they are?
And I can't wait for the reveal. This is a good story, and now I know we'll get some resolution. I'm going to follow this.
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Don't worry, all aspects will be covered. I just don't want to rush anything is all. Thanks for the watch.
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Your welcome, and I'm happy that everything'll be covered eventually.
I am going to recommend this still to EVERYONE!!! It is the best pregnancy story ever!
3816513 Thank you! ^^ Always nice to know I'm doing a good job. Next chapter should be out soon, just giving it the final check over.
silly rainbow nothing ever goes back to normal even if you have an abortion.
Just gonna give ya my Southern honesty I just can’t believe dash would resort to killing off the foal that just old fashion evil hate to say it but it is it’s evil
Interesting story. Maybe more? Hope all is well.