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Fluttershy is always willing to come and cheer Rainbow Dash on, be it for flight competitions, races, or even practise sessions. Unfortunately Fluttershy’s cheering leaves a lot to be desired. Rainbow Dash however has come up with a solution to this problem; dress Fluttershy up as a cheerleader.

The cover image has no name as far as I’m aware but was drawn by the artist Yubi.

Unsurprisingly this fanfic features FlutterDash shipping.

I do not - nor do I claim to - own any characters or artwork I use in this story unless otherwise stated - they belong to their respective series and owners.

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A story of yours I wasn't asked to edit... :pinkiesad2:

The process of putting clothes on was not long one

needs an a between not and long, or remove the one. your call

Edit: all in all, an enjoyable story.

Love the story. FlutterDash is always a great ship. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Keep up the great writing!

Rainbow, you were distracted because you find Fluttershy attractive and wanted to snuggle when you saw her in that cheerleader outfit. :pinkiehappy:

This was a cute little one-shot, pal! :yay: I was wondering what you would've done if you did have the prompt. And now you did! Hooray! :twilightsmile::raritystarry:

And of course...

:yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

Fluttershy is always willing to come and cheer Rainbow Dash on, be it for flight competitions, races, or even practise sessions. Unfortunately Fluttershy’s cheering leaves a lot to be desired. Rainbow Dash however has come up with a solution to this problem; dress Fluttershy up as a cheerleader.

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ok that was hillarious!

Rarity's assumption was great and I wonder what everypony would think when they saw RD making a butterfly in the sky :pinkiehappy: not that I think that she'll mind much now.

....Just a shame that there was no Flutterdash in it, only hints.

2598903 Yeah that's right.... I kinda would want a little more Fluttershy though :rainbowderp:
But other than that good story:raritywink:

*nose bleed* cheerleaders...

WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO FLUTTER DASH!!!! Loved every second, an error here or there but honestly nothing major, made my entire day, always in the mood for a good Flutter Dash story, thank you very much:twilightsmile:

Very interesting. Always up for some FlutterDash. :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

This was one great ship, I loved it! Fine job, mate! :fluttershysad: :heart: :rainbowkiss:

Well, that was very cute and silly. :rainbowkiss:

Very adorably cute! Just the idea of Fluttershy in a cheerleader outfit is adorable.

I can totally empathize with Dash's plight...

Cheerleader Fluttershy would be distracting as hell.

Fluttershy performed a high kick. Rainbow Dash nosedived into the ground. Crashed and burned.

Literary poetry in motion there...

:pinkiesick:

I just love this story. 5/5 Big Mac's :eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

So then, 19 comments and 93 likes, considering this is but a short, sweet, and simple story to which I managed to write up in a single day I am actually quite satisfied with this. Anyway, I shall be replying to comments now, probably should be replying to comments on my collaboration with Rated PonyStar, Kisses are Complicated, first however there are far more comments there. Still I doubt I will be able to reply to all the comments in one fell swoop tonight (NCIS tonight and I've got work in the morning) but I will give it a go.

Before I begin I shall inform you all of two things. First, although minor, I have into account the comments that critiqued this work and as such have ironed out the errors. Secondly, as with all my fanfics I have a blog post dedicated to its development and the ideas behind it, click here for it. With that said let's begin replying. :twilightsmile:

2598329 :pinkiesad2: I'm sorry Ugugg, I had my reasons. I wanted this fanfic to be a surprise for as many of my readers and followers as possible, and as such I wished to be able to upload it before I could even get the chance to talk about it in the fanfiction progression section of my blog (as to why I did not just consider withholding said information, didn't feel it was honest :ajsmug:). The last time you proof-read for me, it became apparent your life is quite busy at the time and as such I did not wish to request your services without giving you sufficient warning in advance. I knew Rated had just finished collage and so had spare time on his hands which is why I went to him for his aid. Apologies if this has displeased you but you will be pleased that I will be requesting your services for future projects, so worry not.

So then... did you enjoy the fanfic? Thanks for commenting Ugugg. :pinkiehappy:

2598330 Jake Roberts, bravissimo to see a comment from you. You'll be happy to know that, as this is a short fanfic and thus easy to edit, I have corrected all of the mistakes you have pointed out. Thanks for that.

I'm glad you enjoyed this story for what it is, a short but cute and funny tale. As for my canon, I've actually been a little unsure as to how I would place this story. As you may or may not know, I like for my fanfics to have continuity, and in regards to MLP I have three fanfiction continuities. Everyday (pending title) which includes Thank You Cider, Secrets which includes Open to Interpretation and Nintendo Gal's officially approved canon entry Snuggles and Nibbles, and the Truth series which starts with Magnetism and has five further entries planned. This story was not thought out with the intention of being apart of the three continuities but I feel it must be applied to one. It's clearly not a part of the Truth series, so that leaves it open to being a story set before the events of Everyday story Thank You Cider or Secret stories Open to Interpretation and Snuggles and Nibbles. I will have to figure this out at a later point. For now I will just say once again thank you for commenting, I appreciate it Jake Roberts. :twilightsmile:

2598369 You know, amusingly enough when I read the first line of your comment I thought you were demanding for the whole Fluttershy putting on clothes scene to be longer :rainbowlaugh:. Considering that as it was from Rainbow's perspective it was being described in a rather risqué manner (K rated risqué at least), I was a little worried as to what you were asking to have extended. Alas you were simply pointing out an error of mine, and you'll be happy to know I have already corrected it. It's easy to do with a one-shot as short as this one.

I'm glad you enjoyed Zyr, thanks for commenting. :twilightsmile:

2598445

FlutterDash is always a great ship.

Too true, too true. :yay::heart::rainbowkiss: Forever!

Well then I'm pleased to hear you enjoyed this story. I'm also of course pleased to hear that you'll be looking forward to my future stories. If there are any of my past works you haven't read I would advise a read of them, if you liked this story I'm sure you'll like them as well(romance, comedic, and of course, FlutterDash). Thanks for the comment. :twilightsmile:

2598468 I seem to have a running theme of characters refusing to admit the obvious. C'mon Rainbow Dash, I'm sure Fluttershy will understand if you put practise aside for one day and instead spend some good quality time with her... preferably through the activity of kissing :scootangel:. I figured you would like this story, cutesy FlutterDash here after all.

Yeah, this is close to what I would have done for the prompt, obviously extended though. If you add in the first scene and then the last scene, with a little moment describing how Fluttershy looks in a cheerleader outfit, then that's pretty much what it would have originally been. I'm glad I was able to extend it though, writing the two adorable chants was neat and I absolutely loved writing Rarity's short scene in this fanfic. So then, I'm glad you enjoyed this fanfic, I hope I was able to take you by surprise with its sudden release, and here's hoping for a future where I have both free time and manage to claim a prompt in the FlutterDash group I have an idea of a story for. Thanks for commenting as always NintendoGal. :twilightsmile:

2598766 Clever indeed, Rainbow Dash should do this more often.

Rainbow Dash: Now the best way to help improve your medical skills is by wearing this nurse outfit.

Fluttershy: Um, Rainbow Dash, I take care of animals, shouldn't I be wearing a vet’s uniform?

Rainbow Dash: Nope, nurse outfit is sex-better! It’s better to wear a nurse outfit! Now just put it on… but take your time, put it on as slowly as you want.

I could probably write an entire one-shot where Fluttershy begins to catch onto these various 'attempts to improve her skills by dressing up' ideas. More of an image than a comment but thanks you for a humorous post all the same. :twilightsmile:

Cute! I love flutterdash shipping :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

Rainbow watch Fluttershy naked ---> no reaction :rainbowhuh:
Rainbow watch Fluttershy dressing up ---> start oggling :rainbowwild:
F*cking logic, I love this story. :yay:
And I think this is the first time that Rainbow is the one with 'strange feelings' in one of your stories. (beeing allergic doesn't count)

Okay then, nothing to be stopping me tonight or tomorrow, I'm getting these replies written up now.

2598903 Well I'm glad it has managed to humour you. One of the goals of this story has been accomplished. Now then, was it cute, because that would achieve the other goal of this short story. :pinkiehappy:

Aside from Rainbow crashing upon Fluttershy performing a high kick, all of Rarity's scenes in this story are probably my favourite. In fact, I enjoyed writing Rarity so much in this fanfic that I was tempted to have a little end scene with her spying on the two 'gushing over how cute they were whilst demanding they hurry and kiss' :rainbowlaugh:.

I wonder how others would react as well. I kind of imagine it to be a very FlutterDash shipper styled view; most ponies assume they are already a couple.

As for the lack of definitive FlutterDash (there is feelings there, obviously)... yeah, I pondered about that before uploading. The point is this story was unplanned and intended to be short, and as I looked over the story I felt that to have it lead into on-page FlutterDash (as in you readers get to see it) would require more time and content to feel proper, to satisfy myself that the relationship developed smoothly. One way around this could have been to have Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash already being a couple however I felt that would interfere with the awkward humour this story used so very much. I can't promise you that my next fanfic will feature definitive and on-page FlutterDash but when NintendoGal and I finish our collaboration, Openly Secret Date, which serves as a sequel to Open to Interpretation and Snuggles and Nibbles, then you will definitely get some. Thanks for the comment FlutterDash7. :twilightsmile:

2599043 Great to hear you think so and while I'm at it, although I need not say it yet again, thanks for the speedy and efficient proof-read. Also thanks for commenting. :twilightsmile:

2599350

>> FlutterDash7 Yeah that's right.... I kinda would want a little more Fluttershy though :rainbowderp:

As you were replying to FlutterDash7's comment, whose one criticism was the lack of concrete FlutterDash, I'm assuming this is what you meant to say. If this is the case then my reply to FlutterDash7's comment should suffice as an explanation.

In the case you meant Fluttershy, well, I don't really have much to add to that. I was going to have Fluttershy turning up to meet Dash again take place from Fluttershy's perspective until Rainbow Dash flew up into the air (where it would be focused on Dash again) but I decided to stick with Rainbow Dash as the key focus. I could have added a small Fluttershy scene, perhaps delving into her thoughts a little, but again this was a short fanfic written up in a single day, I went with what came to mind first mostly.

I'm pleased to hear that you found it to be a good story and I thank you for commenting. :twilightsmile:

2599419 It's not mine but thanks all the same. It’s one of my favourite pictures and a pretty old one in terms of the fandom... pretty old considering it was one of the first FlutterDash pictures I ever came across. When I decided to write this fanfic, this was the first picture that came to mind. Thanks for the comment. :twilightsmile:

2599534 Yeah, pretty sure that was Rainbow Dash's mind-set by the end of this story. You seem to have enjoyed this here story and thanks for the comment. :twilightsmile:

2599542

WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO FLUTTER DASH!!!!

:duck: Hmm, it may just be me but I think you may have enjoyed this fanfic. :pinkiehappy:

I'm very pleased at this here comment and I'm glad you were able to enjoy every second of it. Sorry to hear about the small occasional errors but thanks to reader feedback I have gone through and ironed out all of the mistakes that have been pointed out to me. So yeah, glad you enjoyed and thanks for commenting. :twilightsmile:

2599675 If you're always up for FlutterDash then you'll be happy to know that all four of my MLP stories contain FlutterDash, as well as the collaboration I wrote alongside Rated PonyStar (linky). Please feel free to take a look-see if you haven't already. Thanks for the comment. :twilightsmile:

2599733 Ah, the S.S. FlutterDash is a fine vessel indeed, and while it may not be much I have brought on board for it some extra entertainment. Let this ship sail on forever :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:. Also, thank you for commenting. :twilightsmile:

2600013 Cute and silly was what I was aiming for so job well done there... okay, I was aiming more for short and sweet but I'm pretty sure cute and silly comes under that umbrella. Thanks for commenting. :twilightsmile:

2600760 Indeed, Cheerleader Fluttershy is such a cute thing. In saying that though, I'm pretty sure Rainbow Dash was thinking of cheerleader Fluttershy as little more than just cute :rainbowlaugh:. I appreciate being told that this is a cute fanfic, thank you for the comment. :twilightsmile:

2628281 yes it was cute. You had me buzzing the whole way.
You could always do a story set after this one... With more cute and some added Flutterdash. :rainbowwild::yay:
That story with rarity spying on rainbow and Fluttershy would be cool. :pinkiehappy:

Heads a little foggy and unfocused but I have time right now so I shall finish replying to these comments.

2601973 Yeah, Fluttershy in a cheerleader uniform is quite adorable to picture. I wonder if that would happen in the show. I think the FlutterDash shipper in me would leap for joy if at one of Rainbow's races they had Fluttershy dressed in a cheerleader uniform... although the whole dressing up thing seems more like something Pinkie would do... perhaps Pinkie would and then proceed to rope Fluttershy into also dressing up. Ah, I'm going off topic here.

From your nice little comment it seems you enjoyed this here story and that in turn pleases. Thanks for reading, thanks for commenting. :twilightsmile:

2604402 I guess I could explain my reasoning for writing that sequence in the short stunted manner I did.

I wanted the action to be quick, for the reader to learn what happens in that moment without pause. For that I opted out of describing the scene and made sure to simply tell of the action happening rather than the details or describing of it. The joke, or punch line of the sequence, is the action Fluttershy does, followed by Rainbow Dash's reaction, and finishes with the consequence. I felt that narration or description would slow down the delivery of the joke, without really adding anything to it. This was a sequence for humour, not one of an action scene delivering an expansion of plot, and the actual event had already been informed to the reader at the very start of the story. So a quick sudden delivery without description or narration slowing it down and that was what I was going for.

I'm sorry to hear that you did not enjoy this moment but I hope the rest of the fanfic proved enjoyable for you. Thanks for the comment. :twilightsmile:

2614566 Wonderful to hear, glad you enjoyed this story. I loved your comment, have five moustaches; :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:. Thank you for commenting. :twilightsmile:

2616728 If my five MLP stories are anything to go by (one of them is a collaboration uploaded on Rated PonyStar's profile) then I too love FlutterDash :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:. My MLP OTP and my second favourite ship of all (Kirby and Ribbon from the Kirby series shall always remain my favourite). Great to hear that you think it's cute, great to see you enjoyed this story, and thanks for the comment.

2623333 :rainbowlaugh: This was a hilarious comment. It reminds me of this one comic, with Rainbow Dash on the PC going 'yes, now put on the winter boots, slowly'. The concept of putting on clothes being the equivalent to stripping for humans is humorous to imagine.

Hey now, Rainbow Dash having strange feelings for Fluttershy isn't that rare from me. Remember Kiss-

(beeing allergic doesn't count)

:twilightangry2: Darn it!

What about Thank You Cider! That sort of has Rainbow Dash having strange feelings for Fluttershy (though that may have been brought to light by the incident that occurs in the story). Anyway, glad to see you enjoyed the story, and I love that adorable avatar of yours (for future reference in case you change it and anyone stumbles upon this comment, it's filly Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash sleeping together... in a cute puppy like way, not the other way). Thank you for the comment. :twilightsmile:

2651633

What about Thank You Cider! That sort of has Rainbow Dash having strange feelings for Fluttershy

Yeah but this is a story with Fluttershy's point of view. Rainbow's point of view only appears at Chapter 3 if I remember :duck:

And thanks for the avatar, I've just changed it yesterday. I've discovered that if there is one thing that I love more than FlutterDash, Scootalove, and Tank, it's filly FlutterDash :rainbowkiss:

EEEEEcute! >w< Sequel, sequel! X3!

Added to Twilight's Library on a contributor's recommendation.

cool! :twilightsmile:

Derpy luvs chu all!
:derpytongue2:

Nice, short and sweet.

Another fine work.:twilightsmile:

huh? In thank you cider they were getting...like together in a relationship-ish way and now they are back to friends? I am highly confused. I liked them better in thank you cider cause they were in love for real. :pinkiesad2:

A very nice story to had read before going to sleep my friend. Nice work. *now can't stop thinking of Fluttershy in a cheerleader uniform*

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You and me both, bro'. :rainbowwild:

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