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Base_Cannon


I am a teen brony and I am inspired by reading all of these great stories, so I might make a few of my own.

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Should I do an epilogue?

Comment posted by Private Riften Guard deleted Jun 19th, 2013

Dafuq did I just read.

And also, don't delete comments. That is what people who are dicks do, and it will give MORE dislikes and likes. Maybe not even likes at all.

Man this well um not to be rude but...it just plain sucked Corbin went from human to pony then back again I highly doute Corbin could use the space void to store things like pinkie
Oh well you can try again later>>2723908 and no you should not

2743694 well sometimes people put spoilers or are just being stuck up ***holes and need to be deleted or its just plain offensive(is my comment offensive I was not trying to) and needs to be reported

2744119 I'm sorry person who wrote this but this isn't all that good and I'm just wondering why does this not have a 'random' tag? Because it was EXTREMELY random and I'm sorry but this seems really rushed like you did it in about 15 minutes sorry but it's not good I'm sorry :(

2744167 I also meant to put that I agree with the person that I'm tagging this on their comment

2744167 man now I wish I was not on my phone because then I can put a "well heres your problem" picture.
The plot and the story line was good but I justs need more time to spent on it I would say a hour or so or check it out 20 minutes later ten read it out later so you can find all of the mistakes but if this is your first story it's well done

2744176and one day seems too short maybe that's why it seems rush and why did he meet pinkie get a book then stay home I (or anybrony else) would probably have looked around the town or something and at the end where the mane 6 just happen to be there and apperently just masterbated at the whole thing seems extremely out of character and there isn't much detail in the over all story

(Realistic clop scenes contain comedy.)

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My brain just died for a second.

Hmmmm I Seen that cover art before..l. but where oh where did I see it?

I will be making an epilogue:rainbowkiss: as soon as i am situated to write, will make a post later when i will start it. i know you love it

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