After the defence of Canterlot against the Changelings, it seems only fitting the valiant guards of Equestria's capital should receive some recognition. Right? But strife is still abundant in the capital, still in disarray from the invasion, and the ceremony goes awry.
How you ask? Maybe the stallion with the shades can tell you...
Thank you to Rhino for being my pre-reader, editor and the guy who was there to pick me up when I faceplant in writing!
Coverart credit to Fuyu-Oleander. Click the picture to go to her DeviantArt.
Chapters (2)
Interesting enough to grab my attention on the first chapter, I'll give it a chance... for now.
I forsee the use of many cliffhangers, well done to make the first one a great one
IT'S ABOUT BLOODY TIME
havent read yet but will soon. promise. question though. is this the rewrite of MWtW?
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Yup. In all it's glory
3515972 YES! going to love it then
Damn, off to one hell of a start.
finally read it.... it was fucking amazing man. great job but... where is that chapter two?
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Sorry, I got bogged down with college work and lost motivation. I'm gonna try and write tonight, but I can't guarantee a time when it will be out.
Finally out woo!
3524545 yeah ok. its no big deal. just was wondering. its really good and i cant wait for more. If its a holding thing you could use my OC as well if you want. Evening is a gaurd as well
okay so this is excellent so far. I love how it goes from everyone in high spirits and reguards to WTF just happened
!? Cant wait for thr next chapter
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Awesome start.
My exact words after the last part: what?
Rhino sent me.;)
It's a nice start, I'm interested. His alibi should be fairly strong, so I'm wondering what the charges are based on (and who the accuser is). The whole situation looks like a set up.
Keep going!;)
You have my attention
He dismissed the the thought process quickly, returning his attention to the rest of the Guards as they formed up on the plinth, the black-coated stallion in the front row.....
Double the^
Your pal rhino clued me into this tale of yours. Worthwhile read from what i've seen so far. Only one error so good job. I await ch. 2 but no rush. Ive still got over 180 otherd to read so, haha.
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Thanks very, much for pointing that out!
I'm trying to work on chapter 2, and progress is slow, so I can't guarantee when it will be out. Sorry.
God damn it, Atom... You've got me hooked!.
I would read this...IF THERE WAS A SECOND CHAPTER!!!!
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Look on my page at the progress bar.
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I was referencing that
Oh hey! It lives!
Now, how did Atomic escape the guards? Will be be able to solicit Sharp's help?
Keep going! ;)
JESUS CHRIST MAN YOU GOTTA KEEP UP
Wow it lives
Why must I go and read these seemingly dead stories only to be left on a cliffhanger when I get to the last released chapter...
It was good while it lasted
(It would be amazing if this somehow came back to life!)