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XD funny and good story oh btw there was no clop
2752677 Those are just the first two chapters, there will be more to come! :)
okey-dokey-lokey! good to know I suppose. Right now I'm writing a story about how the manbe 6 get sucked into that show Adventure Time.2752700
One of the best stories I've ever read
The portions sound like they are enough to actually kill Fluttershy, or at least make her need to sleep in AJ's Barn until they can widen her doors of her cottage.
Great story! You've definitely got something rolling here...
..... ME GUSTA!
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Have a peek at chapter 3, ;)
2 new chapters on day two! It's like freakin' Christmas
Damn I can't wait for another chapter...
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2766296 Yes, that's AJ speaking in the first bit. You can tell by the accent, and by the lead-in in the second bit, 'the import of AJ's words.' Thanks for the feedback, :)
This was cute, the first chapter felt kinda weird with how easily Flutters got horny, but overall, I like this and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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While I understand you're eager for stuffing content, it is not the sole focus of this story, and I'd appreciate some patience. Breakfast will, as I implied at the end of the latest chapter, resume in the next installment. ;) This chapter was getting over-long as it was. It is my opinion that while a fetish should remain central to a fetish story, there is plenty of room for character development, more conventional eroticism, and plot as well if you intend a tale of any significant length. It's the shorter stories that need to get right down to business. It's unfortunate your personal tastes clash with mine, but I'm not willing to lop dimensions off of my story.
Did you notice anything specific that made this chapter hard to follow? Bits that threw off the flow for you?
As for the lack of foreplay, Fluttershy's been something of a needy wreck since gaining this new body of hers, and having already been denied and put off once, she would brook no further delay. They didn't even make it to the bed.
Very Well done.
Well the cat is out of the bag... I can see it now.
3049413 the possible foreshadowing of those emoticons kinda scares me...
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Close! You'll see fairly soon. Banged out six pages of the next chapter today.
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Anybody tell you that you are awesome?
want cake so badly
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I wanted some ferociously after writing that scene.
looks like Rarity is beginning to like being fat :D
Poetic justice, very clever writer man!
So no one stopped for a minute to go over every thing that rhymes with that. If it was a warning in rhyme I would assume someone would try it, at least the smart pony. I was completely lost in the biology lesson, but then again I am tired and too lazy to reread it.
You, my friend, had a lot of good rhymes
And they were, of course, in perfect time
I suck at rhymes... But yeah, great read so far!
3143744 After writing that chapter I can understand the writers not featuring Zecora in more episodes. That took awhile! I salute those who make her a major (or Celestia forbid) the main character in their fic!
Is the chapter title a reference to the South Park movie? I swear it is
3162685 A-yup. Getting harder to come up with appropriate pie references for chapter titles at this point, >,<
3162703would you say that's the hardest part of writing?
3237510 The hardest part of writing is just writing. Once you have something down on the page you can polish it, but getting it down in the first place is the toughest.
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUN
I REALLY like where this is going...
...I hope she's right!
He had me going!
...Kinky!
Hehehe. Now it's the good stuff!
I think her appetite will win, hehe...
Teehee! I love it! Hope this continues, I want to see Fluttershy now!
...HOT DAMN. Kinky. A rather unexpected twist I must say.
Oh god quite possibly the sexiest line I've ever heard. UNF.
Sweet Celestia that was a smexy chapter!
Great cliffhanger, can't wait for the next update!
Upvoted for the title alone
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Thank you kindly, ;)
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Didn't keep you waiting long, did I? :D