Trivium grew up living one of the roughest and loneliest childhoods possible. When he was 18, he met Rainbow Dash, which changed his life for the better. Now, at 23, his life seems stable, until one night, he has a nightmare that seems all too real. He seeks help from friends as his world slowly seems to fall apart, but they say that it's just him. Is Trivium going insane, or is Equestria really falling?
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Now that...was quite interesting. I was hooked quite early on, there are some good writing techniques used and you set the atmosphere quite well. Detailed, but interesting too. I think it could be a really good fic. :)
2795605 I actually got the name Trivium from that band lol.
2796464 Thanks, trying something different for once, and it's quite fun.
:D
that was awsane story
when is the next one coming
Good chapter overall, I was interested and hooked throughout and I like how you made me think of the first line of Bohemian Rhapsody.
Although... maybe it was a bit repetitive...
2912592 As someone who isn't entirely insane yet, I'm writing off of experience. I'll drive myself deeper from sanity tonight by surfing deep, dark, evil internet or something.
Just kidding...
Oh Celestia. I thought this was a really good chapter. The effect with the burn marks, the constant waking up; it makes me wonder what the hell is going to happen next, with it being so unpredictable, yet enticing and hooking.
Overall, well executed, exciting chapter, making the plot even more unpredictable. :3
Here, have a moustache:
InSANiTY...
epic chaneg shift
2950023 I learned that a few deep-internet diving trips can really help someone understand insanity...
I'm not sure what to think of this chapter in all truth.
Yes, you are making it somewhat obvious that he is going insane, yet also make it so that it could be real.
Although, I'm not sure where the plot is going, with this chapter making it quite obscure.
I don't know what's happening next, is it dream or reality? I think that sums it up.
Anyway, good writing in general, you still kept me interested and hooked though and I'll still be waiting for the next chapter.
w-what?
2983758 Yes.
yes to what I'm going a little insane now
2989346
You: "W-what?"
Me: "Yes."
You: "Yes to what?"
Yes to what.