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After browsing the magic books in the late afternoon Princess Twilight accidentally recites a spell that turns her back into a filly except with her new found ascension; she has now been turned into an Alicorn filly. Now the princesses of the sun and moon have to take care of her...for however long that is. Can they find a cure or will Twilight start her life over again?
I am sorry for any similarities to any other stories, I can assure you these are all my ideas.
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I doubt anyone's really good at politics. Politics are dirty and all about who can fling the most dirt and be the most crooked. Honesty was once valued but in today's world money and greed are all that come from it.
Regardless this is an intresting set up though others have done this same idea before. "Twilight messes up a spell and turns herself into a filly."
Here's hoping you'll add your own take.
Baby vision is always cute.
At least unlike another fic Celestia knew right away to get Twilight diapered after the first accident.
Now I wonder, is she going to tell Twilight's friends what happened or is she just going to keep this to herself, Luna, and the guards?
Age regression fic, first comment is social commentary & politics. WTF.
>Dat synopsis
...Sigh.
Not even going to bother.
Try making the chapters a bit longer. But it is good so far. Keep up the good work.
This has been done, and it's been done much better.
Honestly, this is at least the fifth "Twilight age spell mishap" fic I've seen in a while.
Normally I'd read it just for the hell of it, but I'd be reading the same five stories over again. No thanks.
Is it just me or is this becoming the new thing around here?
2801645 Well he asked if anyone had any experience with politics. Not my fault if I see them for what they are.
Just don't ever stop doing the baby vision. It's too cute.
I wonder how long this touching story will last?
2802997 I guess as long as I want it too. Thank you for the nice compliment.
2803036 No problem, this story is really cute. You're trying to make this your own idea and so far you're doing a good job.
Next chapter will probably be the next morning from Celestia's point of view.
2803049 Your good. Yes it will be. I also plan on a whole lot of humor as well so you can look forward to that. (Sometimes I'm not good at making funny moments so I'll try my best)
2803120 I think I can already see a funny moment. Celestia's going to do what every mom has to do for their kids. Sure she may have magic but that's not going to help you if you have no idea what you're doing.
2801991 I knew I'd seen this story somewhere before...
2803572 I don't know if I should take that badly or as a good sign?
THE CHAPTERS AREN'T VERY LONG!
2803651 Sorry I guess? Besides chapter 2 they are getting longer. Is that all that is wrong with it?
I'm surprised to say that google translates better english to spanish than the other way around (thank goodness i don't need it)... But yeah it would be something along the lines of "Para ser joven de nuevo, retroceder el reloj hacia la infancia, de nuevo a la cuidadosa mano de una madre"
I really enjoy reading this it's adorable.
I think your doing a great job keep up the good work. :
2804236 Thank you so much! Is that the correct way to say it?
Dude this chapter was hilarious good work
keep it up
Oh selfish little Twilight....
Celestia is not yours. Also Luna is not a toy.....
My vote is do what ya want. But .....
If you were gonna go the changeling invasion route.
It might be more fun for the invading forces to get mixed up in the confusion and have wacky changeling guard/babysitter hijinks ensue.
Heck the changelings may even swear to serve the filly and this will lead to the natural reaction of adult Twilight being:
Wat...
.......
Should she ever return.
2805018 Thanks I'll keep that in mind. That could be funny!
Oh of course Celestia, stick Luna with foal sitting. It's not like you knew diaper duty was coming or anything.
Glad to see Twilight's friends are already aware of the situation. I know Pinkie Pie is going to be thrilled.
Ah come on Twily Auntie LuLu isn't all that bad. She's just not very good with foals that's all.
Still at least you've warmed up to her.
You could involve Discord (now that he is reformed), I'm sure he would love this "Filly Chaos"
2805557 Lol I was planning to! There can't be a filly Twilight without chaos (as Luna unfortunately found out) and we all know how Discord loves chaos!
Kind of rushed and you need to remember that whenever someone else speaks you start a new paragraph.
Also is there a reason for including Luna's royal Canterlot voice?
2808260 Thank ya kindly! I'll edit it a bit. Try to make it seem less rushed.
i'm loving this story!
2808265 Compared to the previous chapters this one didn't quite feel as strong. I'm hoping this is just because it was rushed and you'll take your time for future chapters.
2808282 To be honest I thought it felt weaker because of sister feels but again I'm not experienced. Where are the parts you think need most editing? Maybe elaborate on the different materials Celestia is introduced to?
2808302 That and perhaps include more dialogue from the mane six. Make them seem more intrested in what's going on, like make it so the first thing we hear from the mane six is Pinkie Pie fawning over how cute Twilight is and Rainbow Dash ends up pulling her away. Then at various points Applejack and Rarity explain to Celestia about what it was like raising Apple Bloom and looking after Sweetie Belle. And include some advice from Fluttershy. Maybe even have Rainbow Dash admit to the cuteness a little.
2808313 oooooo okay! On it!
you're going to MAKE MORE!
You sir (as soon as I fuigure out how have earned a follower!
2808440 aww thanks
I fuigured out how! You have another follower!*squee*
2808484
2808313 Alright! I think I fixed it! What do you think any more edits to be done?
2808593 Not really. I see you even included Spike. Good thinking.
Still laughing at the toy. The Toy never gets a break does she?
I cant help but laugh
this is so awesome....
20% more awesome since you added Rainbow
and 50% more awesome with Rarity
DUDE...
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2809586 Awww thanks!
naaaah seriously, great fic, sometimes a little doozy in the filly twi parts but dude...
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TASTE DA RAINBOW!!!!!!
AND I JOIN!
2811086 what do you join?