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UNITLuna004
Just a random Brony writing some of the most unappreciative stories. Like Gears of War, Darkness(soon), and other things.
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A few tweaks here and there and little re-writing and you're golden.
Seems interesting. But you need to describe how the ponies look. Saying that they are anthro isn't enough, because some don't even know what that is, and think that it is humanized. Do they have fur, pony facial structure, and unguligrade legs with hooves?
Also, you should tell us how old the CMC, and the other young ones are in this story.
Anyway, I am interested in seeing where this goes, and what the romances are going to be.
I'm getting to that when one of them meet either the Crusader of Diamond.
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Okay then.
By the way, tp respond to someone you just have to click the little speach bubble on the upper right corner of their comment box. That way they would know you responded.
Random question:Will there be brumak riding? Also,Loving this so far,keep up the good work
3207953 GOOOLLLDDEEN! Sorry I had to make a Goldmember joke.
3210920Maybe there will be. It's still in progress.
3209694Thank you!
Dude can't read it there is a password
3301805You mean my story because there isn't a password,
3303643 whenever I click on the second chapter it says I need to put in a password to read it
3303649Ohh. Sorry that upload was an accident. I'm still need to finishes editing and it be uploaded soon.
3303724 oh ok thanks for the heads up cant wait to read it :-)
Will any of the new locusts be in here to
3304958Like from the game or made up ones?
3303730 Your welcome!
Please update soon!!! I'm waiting and I can't wait any longer!
hmmm.... seem legit to me, i want to see where this goes cause i haven't seen many gears of war crossovers that are finished
3306230 yeah from the game but it would be awesome if u made a new one
3315920okay it'll be update this week if nothing happens.
3316436 Equestria locust version maybe? I don't know yet it still in progress. But I'll see if they can be in it.
very nice.
I can't help but notice that there are few basic errors in your story. If you need an editor, I would gladly help you tweak the bits and pieces that need, well... tweaking
On another note, this is pretty good so far! I like the concept behind it, seems interesting.
I LOVE IT
3319266 How do I send it to you?
3322239
Through a P.M (Personal message). Just go to my profile and click the mail envelope next to my name!
3323066thanks
So the ponies are gonna find a COG on the beach.....Honestly if he's in full gear they might think he's a robot
3375691If you read the first chapter you'll know that they Stranded Four are teenagers. Martin is the only one with any kind of proper protection gear. The only thing Cog are his boots, gloves, knees, and shoulder armor. I going to give a better description of them later on.
I haven't even started reading it and i see my name in it!
3387710 Really or are you just messing with me.
You know I can't get over the fact that they all,especially Martin,forgot the scientist said turning it on could blow up half of sera. You know I may be stupid sometimes but that was downright idiotic to forget crucial Info like that.
You know this may not have a comedy tag but its still kinda funny.
3395972 Well they are teenagers, but they didn't turn it on. A bullet hit the machine that caused it to turn on. Martin tried to stopped it, but failed.
3396005Regardless he tried to turn the damn thing on like a........well a dumbass!
3396069 Can't disagree with that.
A good chapter. Though there are a few mistakes in it. You also still did not describe what exactly the ponies look like.
3403529 Will be explain in the chapter. When Martin wakes up or something along those lines.
Post next chapter soon I can't wait any longer. I need locust death and explosions, emphasis on EXPLOSIONS!!!!
3468873 I know it in working progress. Please wait a little longer.
Yay update. The pictures didn't show up but I assume they saw a dead Theron, a severed drone head,and a.....ummmm.......a few hammerbursts or lancers mk1/2. Did I win? Do I get a cookie? Am I smarter than a fifth grader? Tell me!
3538160 Your were mostly right. Sorry if the pictures didn't load. I don't how to properly up load them.
3538160 Do you know how or anyone who could help me out?
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Sadly I do not but this has not been the first fanfic I've read where this has happened. You should try asking more people who you think might be able to help. One more thing do I or do I not get a cookie?
3539294 Thank you for the advice and no cookies for you it's past your bed time.
So does anyone know how to put picture?
Dude I am loving this story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
3647906 Thank you! You're making me blush.
Like the plan dude that what Americans would do that or shoot everything
3731017 I know right.