It's a story about Colgate the dentist waiting in line. Written for the contest group's first challenge. Read it if you like Colgate or waiting or are in the contest group, I guess.
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I enjoyed it well enough. You had me chuckling at a few parts.
Thanks for taking part in the contest.
Same as SilentBelle, I liked it too, thanks for taking part of the contest.
2934441 Thanks, I rather liked yours too
I must say that was rather hilarious.
Who knew that such tragedy and emotion could be found in one line.
Well done indeed!