the humans occupy most of there universe and have little resources left but one scientist discovers a strange gem that emanates an organic energy that is not of there world. after the discovery of the gems true origin the humans begin to occupy this newly discovered land.
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I love it! Humans make a clean sweep over Equestria for resources. No 'friendly' negotiations and straight to the point.
However, there is a ton of spelling errors and spacing issues you should probobly touch up on.
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He is right, though. So far the idea is great, the grammar and punctuation just needs some touching up, and you'll be fine
@Distrance I'm sorry if that was a dick move, I agree with your review, I was just making a joke.
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Glad you saw the humor in it (or at least didn't think I was a douche)