Rainbow Dash is visiting her father this weekend in Cloudsdale. While happy to seeing her dad again, she is here however for another reason. The only thing is that she worries how he will react to this.
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To be honest I was thinking it would have been Twilight. Short but well done, seen one too many fics that show the parents being anti-gay crusaders so I love that he accepts her. Now genderbent Mac? That was certainly a twist
I'm with Celestias Paladin was not expect a genderbent Big Mac.
Great story I loved it
Don't tell anyone, they might alert the religous extremists. That won't be pretty.
Ah thanks guys
By the way I got the idea for the ending from a popular fanfic, here's the link.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/119178/to-win-the-shields-heart
I knew when he said that she shouldn't come over line, that the reason was going to be cheesy.
Other than that a heartwarming short story.
The twist ending didn't shock me. R63 is pretty common on here. Not that I don't like it, I just am used to it I guess.
I'm gonna put this bluntly
Your grammar sucks
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Yeah, I should really work on my grammar.:
3041560 yes, yes you should
Ehhh....
Meow....
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Um.........Alright?