It all started with the wrath of nature. It always has.
Four souls are trapped on a tropical island after a devastating hurricane destroys their vessels. Now, Octavia, Vinyl, Trixie, and a human named Dave are thrown into the claws of untamed mother nature. Together, they must face the trials of the island until they're rescued or escape.
As the gears begin turning and civilizations meet, the conflict threatens to leave a permanent mark on the world.
NOTE: at certain parts can contain gore
Special Thanks to Alexstrazsa for editing the story.
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AN: I'm still quite new to fan fic writing, and it's a hobby for fun. English is not my first language, so hope i won't be nuked for it by the grammar nazi swarms ^^:
YES,YOU ARE NOT DEAD
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Yusss, i'm alive, I'M ALIVE! I know i should be more active, but with holidays on the horizon~
Any comments of down votes and why?
I hate cliff hangers
Oh ya, I love the story by the way :D
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Now now, i don't leave you hang there to long
And thank you!
did it say FAUST be merciful???
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Yup, alas Lauren Faust, mother of G4 Ponies but here the creator deity the ponies belive in.
I like this story, its got promise.
but I have a question, is this going to turn into a romance?
because it feels like its building into that... which is fine! I'd love to see something like that, but the story doesn't have a romance tag so I figured I'd ask.
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I'm not specifically focusing on romance, but it is part of life, so will see how it goes down
Now the humans have their eyes on the world, but soon the other civilizations learn of their presence. I plan to make a new chapter with in two weeks time or so, as have 3 stories in progress.
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Understandable, you've got three story's and you down want to neglect any of them.
Seems like these humans need a new place to live and while Celestia might be willing to help someone in need(if they can control themselves for five goddamn minutes!), but I wonder if the other races of the planet would be cool with it?
hell, even if there not what are they going to do about it?
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Haha true, well it's a little bit like rock scissor paper, tech beat's natural strenght, magic beats tech, natural strenght overwhelms magic, so far you see two sides clearly
You can expect the Gryphons and the Changelings do there share
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Sounds like when that "supercarrier" arrives the griffons and changelings are going to be slaughtered.(humanity FTW)
Really the only thing that could possibly stand in our way...is Celestia.
And even then Its just a stalemate, She wouldn't attack us for fear of us nuking the crap out of her little ponies.
http://mylittlefacewhen.com/f/10253/
And we wouldn't attack them because Celestia will throw the sun at us...
(also their adorable)
http://mylittlefacewhen.com/f/3906/
But I'm sure you've got something up your sleeve.
(btw I'm looking forward to the ponies reactions to seeing space level techhttp://mylittlefacewhen.com/f/7785/)
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Well if you read carefully, they already see it, well Tia and Lulu, they are amazed but not as much as say a mortal pony would be lol
And the super carrier will be a force to recon with but not an auto win, there will be no auto win for either side, and humans would play carefull, avoid conflict as possible, but that does not mean it will be avoided
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yeah this is going to be good I can feel it.
Good so far, I didn't see any errors jump out at me.
also I like that their helping Lyra, and god damn that super carrier sounds scary!
all in all this is looking good.
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Psssst, don't spoilt it for the others XD
Good god, that super carrier!
And good move with the fusion warheads! Much cleaner than fission ones!
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Thanks hehe, and will see some nuking but have to be patient for those
Dayyyyyyuumm..... I had always seen Chrysalis as kind of a moron, but hell here she seems like an actual threat!
...hmm and that other surviver....grey mane and yellow coat?.....
the only pony I could think of with a grey mane and yellow coat is...well...
Daring Do...
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Hehe, guess that made it easy, but peices soon fall in place ;) and yes, Chrysisalis finally grew up, well some
General:spartan 117 mark ll a.k.a master chief deployed! give him a shotgun and the coordinates of the changelings!
Good Chapter! I can see your setting up something big.
also! http://images.search.yahoo.com/images/view;_ylt=A with the chapter title!
Indeed good chapter and 2k-3k words is fine
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Soz, no Master Chief here, will nukes and orbital beams do?
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Well, you kno Chrysi, she loves to cook up big plans, and this time she did took the advance villian class before act
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Thank you! I'll keep them comming and now there be some action ahead, expect a weekly two weekly update rate, the other stories need some love too
Next Chapter should be around in 3-4 days
All i say there be some blood spilled
you should get an editor. jus' zayin'
Oh yes Cannibalism, nukes and war oh my!
Love it! love every second! I have a good feeling about this fight
A GRAND SHOW OF FORCE!!!
So... How are things going on the story?
Vinyl, Octavia, Trixie, and a human. A very odd pair to see. I'm intrigued.
Not a huge fan of the back-to-back you made. But I still enjoy this story for the moment.